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Posted Aug 9, 2026 · 21 lines · 3 critiques

It’s been two weeks
I can’t stop thinking about you
It’s been two weeks
You’re still with me everywhere I go
It’s been two weeks
I miss you

“What did you do?”
Was your question to me once
I ask you the same now
What did you do to me?
How did you do it?
Why did you leave me ?

I know, I already said it
I miss you

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I just can’t forget you
I’ve tried… it’s impossible

My mind keeps bringing you up
Your words, your voice, your face
I wish I could tell you this
But we are over
And it’s only your memory with me

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August 2026
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on Two weeks from @Tink
"Welcome to Neopoet! Thank you for sharing your first poem with us. I agree with Hot, this is raw emotions! I do however, think you did a great job conveying the feeling of loss. The emptiness. I will agree with Hot, tha…"
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@Edward
09 Sun

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on Two weeks from @A Hot Photon
"Hello! This is a very raw poem full of emotion, but in my opinion, it’s too much like prose with line breaks. I know the advice sounds trite at this point, but I really do think “showing instead of telling” would be ver…"
09 Sun

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