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MissRayaRisingStar
Member since July 1, 2026
Member for 7 days
Time Stoppppped....
sometimes some moments is like floating in the ocean of my thoughts
sometimes i wonder what am i suppose to do in this endless thoughts
i always hope,believe,care,yet deep down i know its worthless
i always want to cry ,hug tight,scream form long endless
but these ocean of thoughts sometimes feels so tasty
it gives me poems ,fantasy world oh so fasty
there comes a boat named poetry i drop all colorful shiny pebbles thoughts in that boat
there comes a boat of poison as i over fill it with negative & trauma thoughts in that boat
there comes a ship of dreams of life i want to live as i hop in that ship
there comes a hole in that ship called reality that sink my dream ship
finally i here laugh it out about writing my moments into poetry
MissRayaRisingStar’s timeline
- July 2026
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06 MonReceived a critique
on Time Stoppppped.... from @Geezer
"use words and poetry to extinguish the fire in their souls, some people use it to start the fires. I have used it as both a refuge and a means to keep me interested in the world that keeps right on going with or without…" -
06 MonFirst publication
Time Stoppppped....
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06 MonPosted a poem
Time Stoppppped....
"sometimes some moments is like floating in the ocean of my thoughts" -
01 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 5 days later.
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A soul wandering in illusion yet diving deeper in it .
Location: India, IND
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