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moonpoeta
Member since March 5, 2026
Member for 3 months, 13 days
Whispering trees
"I wish I had told you
that whispering trees would cradle every fragment of you,
And the wind would pirouette with your sorrow.
I never fathomed the shape of forever—
In this fleeting world, you exist but a breath.
As years unfurled, I believed I could understand,
The ink you bled but then ignored,
A child of shadows, never guided home.
Perhaps the haze corrodes my sight when I gaze behind,
Yet even as I peer into the distance ahead,
there's nothing left to find."
I tried to catch my breath and paused for a second.
“Do the whispering trees keep their own watchful eyes?", I asked.
“They have no eyes—only endless ears, to gather every breath of sorrow, every whisper, every lie,” you replied.
And the whispering trees began to sigh.
moonpoeta’s timeline
- April 2026
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10 FriReceived a critique
on Whispering trees from @Lavender
"Hello, moonpoeta! I never fathomed the shape of forever... what poetic language. The trees, hearing every breath of sorrow, every whisper, every lie. Just beautiful! I think I'd leave the quotation marks off entirely. I…" - March 2026
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05 ThuFirst publication
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