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ocean oracle

Posted Nov 21, 2025 · 16 lines · 2 critiques

My mare guardian true
guiding me through with a light heart
she speak wisdom in my ear so soft
steering me towards destiny keepers

she shows the way to those in need
come what may
she braid my hair with a gentle hand
braiding wisdom into each strand

she keeps secrets
loving me regardless through each life pace
knowing I oppose obedient she set me free
and raises a sword for me steadfast for me

in the midst of storm she calms the seas
a shelter from wind a refuge for me
her unwavering love cures me
a bond so true her love is pure

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December 2025
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Received a critique
on ocean oracle from @Leslie
"I feel this way about myself. Even though I regularly curse God, because of afflictions, He doesn't seem to notice and guides me through my storms despite! Great poem!"
November 2025
21 Fri

Posted a poem
ocean oracle
"My mare guardian true"
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Posted a poem
Flip mode
""Flip me like a toasted bread"
Open thread 17 lines
17 Mon

Received a critique
on Deep bronze flavour from @mark
"This is an absolutely stunning and resonant poem that uses the sweet, complex imagery of "caramel" to explore the painful realities of identity, marginalization, and resilience. The opening lines immediately draw us in…"
17 Mon

Critiqued
"My little Barbie doll" by @poetaldo
"The teen in me just resurfaced from reading this Sending love"
17 Mon

Critiqued
"Origin Story" by @BlueSkies
"It's funny how this resonated with me I got a pen without a book the only thing I was taught was how to hold it...lol I remember my brother chasing me because I stole his science noted It's beautiful how being imperfect…"
17 Mon

Posted a poem
Deep bronze flavour
"Taking third place among five caramel competitors"
Open thread 23 lines
15 Sat

Highest posting month
November 2025 — 5 poems
14 Fri

Received a critique
on Abuse we bare from @Candlewitch
"You are very welcome! sincerely, Cat"
14 Fri

Critiqued
"«Much Better, Isn’t It?" by @Niko Knightley
"My mom says religion is what Makes your heart light If painting smile Setting heart free do the work for you Cheers mama I see a young person in every line is great"
14 Fri

Critiqued
"FLIM-FLAM SAM" by @Triskelion
"In South Africa right now we running a movement for GBV the very same government officials stated that we are embarassing them Scams of çommand' they refused to accept our petition"
14 Fri

Critiqued
"From my own perspective!" by @Leslie
"As a young woman Who spent her time with what may come I found myself thinking is it worth I love how it flows with emotional intelligency"
14 Fri

First critique offered
on "From my own perspective!" by @Leslie
14 Fri

Received a critique
on Abuse we bare from @Candlewitch
"As a victim of mental, emotional and physical abuse (and torture) i can heavily relate to your poem! I agree with Geezer completely... these lines are so very true: We are programmed that, it's okay to suffer in the han…"
13 Thu

Received a critique
on Abuse we bare from @Geezer
"emphasized the abuse felt by many women all over the world. Men who rule by fear and repression, are rarely in control of themselves. I salute you and those women who are abused, both mentally and physically. Teach your…"
13 Thu

Received a critique
on Abuse we bare from @Clentin
"Only one poem may be submitted for any contest, please choose which one you want for the contest"
13 Thu

Posted a poem
Abuse we bare
"I was given a chance to ink down my thoughts."
Open thread 18 lines
13 Thu

Received a critique
on Me painter from @Clentin
"Liked your poem. Keep writing View other poets, comment on their Oems!"
12 Wed

Received a critique
on Me painter from @Leslie
"I love the mystical description and am aware of what the third eye is and means. Great write! If you have time please read and comment on mine! Leslie."
12 Wed

First publication
Me painter
12 Wed

Posted a poem
Me painter
"When you craft my head"
Open thread 31 lines
12 Wed

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