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mmartell
Member since May 13, 2023
Member for 3 years
9/11
Two thousand one, nine eleven
Five thousand plus arrive in heaven
As they pass through the gate,
Thousands more appear in wait
A tall bearded man,
wearing a stovepipe hat
steps forward and greets them,
Then says, "Lets chat".
They settle down in seats of clouds
A man named Martin shouts out proud
"I have a dream!" and once he did
The Newcomer says, "Your dream still lives."
Groups of soldiers in blue and gray
Others in khaki, and green then say
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"We're from Bull Run, Yorktown, the Maine"
The Newcomer says, "You died not in vain."
From a man on sticks one could hear
"The only thing we have to fear.
The Newcomer says, "We know the rest,
trust us sir, we've passed that test."
A man with a twang from New England shores
Then proclaimed in a voice they had all heard before
"Courage like yours does not hide in caves
You can't bury freedom, in a grave,"
A silence fell within the mist
Somehow the Newcomer knew that this
Meant time had come for her to say
What was in the hearts of the five thousand plus that day
"In the land of the living, we wrote reports,
Watched our children play in sports
Worked our gardens, sang our songs
Went to church and clipped coupons
We smiled, we laughed,
we cried, we fought
Unlike you, great we're not"
The tall man in the stovepipe hat
Stood and said, "don't talk like that!
Look at your country, look and see
You died for freedom, just like me"
Then, before them all appeared a scene
Of ruined streets and twisted beams
Death, destruction, rubble and dust
And people working just 'cause they must
Hauling ash,
lifting stones,
Knee deep in hell
But not alone
"Look! Blackman, whiteman, brownman, and yellow
Side by side helping their fellow!"
So said Martin, as he watched the scene
"Even from nightmares, can be born a dream."
Down below three firemen raised
The colors high into ashen haze
The soldiers above had seen it before
On Iwo Jima back in '44
The man on sticks studied everything closely
Then shared his perceptions on what he saw mostly
"I see pain, I see tears,
I see sorrow - but I don't see fear."
"You left behind husbands and wives
Daughters and sons and so many lives
are suffering now because of this wrong
But look very closely. You're not really gone.
All of those people, even those you've never met
All of their lives, they'll never forget
Don't you see what has happened?
Don't you see what you've done?
You've brought them together, together as one.
The man named Abe stood and said
"Welcome my friends," and from there he led,
five thousand Newcomers, all heroes to heaven
On this day of our Lord, two thousand one nine eleven.
mmartell’s timeline
- May 2024
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13 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2023
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18 Mon
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18 Mon
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- July 2023
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23 Sun
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18 Tue
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16 SunPosted a poem
loves philosophy
"The fountains mingle with the river and the rivers ocean, The winds of heaven mix for ever with a sweet emotion; nothing in the world is single ,All things law divine In one another's being migle *** Why not i with thine ? see the mountains kiss high heaven, And the waves clasp one another ; No sister *** flower would be forgiven if it disdain'd its brother; And the sunlight clasps the earth , And the moonbeams kiss the sea*** What is all this sweet work worth if thou kiss not me ?" -
15 SatHighest posting month
July 2023 — 7 poems
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14 FriReceived a critique
on the moment u left me from @Lavender
"Hello! I see from your profile that you are also involved with music - this particular piece feels very much like a song in its rhythm and language. It may help the reader with the flow if you separated the lines like s…" -
13 ThuPosted a poem
the moment u left me
"my heart split in two.one side filled with memories, the other side died with you. i often lay awake at night when the world is fast asleep,and take a walk down memory lane with tears upon my cheek rembering you is easy,i do it every day buut missing you is a heartache that never goes away,i hold u tightly within my heart and there you will remain you see life has gone on without you but will never be the same" -
13 ThuCritiqued
"back baby" by @the mad anarchist
"keep up the awesome work and love this poem it speaks truth and raw feelings" -
10 MonPosted a poem
hurt and abuses
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10 MonPosted a poem
hurt n abused
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10 MonPosted a poem
hurt n abused
- June 2023
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28 WedPosted a poem
heart break
"they say heart break hurts like hell but baby whats hell its just another spell comin from under the well like a wishing well but dont worry cuz we can just wish on a shotting star and let our hearts raw until we see the night of the stars cuz baby this isnt a heart break its two hearts that beat as one unto the time comes near lets not think of this year" -
25 Sun
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18 Sun
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13 TueCritiqued
"vampire sunlight or tender eclipse" by @the mad anarchist
"love it keep up the amazing work" -
10 Sat
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10 SatFirst critique offered
on "dreams" (since unpublished) by @the mad anarchist
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10 SatPosted a poem
cant take that from me
"see me work hard for something then someone comes around n takes it from u dont let that shit happen charce wht u have and hold on to it wit every dyin last breath thats wht i do cant take that from me" -
05 MonPosted a poem
casper
"she looks like she just seen casper the ghost but wait u better hide cuz whos that in the woods is that freedie cooger lookin the most but oh no here comes penny wise lookin to think hes the most when hes only wise u better find the ride before u gotta hide until it be ur end of time because it looks like they found chucky tryin to bury her alive until now thats the end of this rhyme ur time has came to say ur end but dont worry they cant take the pain away from us because of the way we play this game we cant be dentated" - May 2023
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17 WedFirst publication
guy i love
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13 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 3 days later.
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music n poet lookin to make it better
Location: halifax canada
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9/11
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loves philosophy
the moment u left me
hurt and abuses
hurt n abused
hurt n abused
heart break
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