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Rafik87
Member since February 26, 2023
Member for 3 years, 3 months
Smokescreen
Inhale, exhale, the smoke surrounds,
A moment's respite, a fleeting pleasure found.
The rush of nicotine, the calming of nerves,
A brief escape, a temporary curve.
But what of the cost, the toll it takes?
This dance with fate, what's truly at stake?
The slow decay, the damage wrought,
From each inhale, the life we've brought.
A paradoxical act, a twisted game,
To indulge in what may cause our pain.
The empty promises, the lies it's taught,
A temporary high, a lifetime lost.
The smoke, a veil, a foggy shroud,
Obscuring the truth, a tempting cloud.
But in this act, we must be wise,
Or risk sealing our own demise.
Rafik87’s timeline
- February 2024
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26 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2023
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27 MonReceived a critique
on Smokescreen from @Sen99
"Smoking has been banned here in public places : bars, pubs, cafes, public transport, trains for a few years but there are those for whom nicotine is a pleasure, even after vaping, they go back to tobacco. Your poem them…" -
26 Sun
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26 SunReceived a critique
on Monkey Ways from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Well done with your poem. There certainly is a dark side which I believe we all carry. I think it’s important for each one of us to understand that darkness in ourselves and in that way maybe shield others from needless…" -
26 SunFirst publication
Monkey Ways (since unpublished)
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26 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
My name is Rafik Polyakov, and I am a writer. I was born in Russia but moved to England at a young age, and it was here that my love for literature began to take shape. I was fascinated by the way that words could be woven together to create a story, to evoke emotions, and to transport the reader to another world. I began to devour books, reading everything from classic Russian literature to contemporary British fiction.
Location: England, UK
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