annanymus

Member since January 3, 2023

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Punishment

Posted Jan 23, 2023 · 4 lines · 2 critiques

I am drawn to you
Like a fish is drawn to water
But due to what I can't undo
I shall be drawn and quartered

annanymus’s timeline

January 2024
03 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2023
24 Tue

Received a critique
on Punishment from @Candlewitch
"I completely agree with Kat! please give feedback on others poems and also respond to comments that you GET on your poems. *the other Cat"
23 Mon

Received a critique
on Punishment from @Candlewitch
"interesting... I would like more information as you have snared my attention. *hugs, Cat"
23 Mon

Posted a poem
Punishment
"I am drawn to you"
Open thread 4 lines
22 Sun

Received a critique
on Nevertheless from @Candlewitch
"I agree with every word that Kat and Geezer have said to you. please print them out and tape them to your mirror and read them any time you feel a bit down. read them out loud and keep them as a mantra! *hugs & love, Cat"
22 Sun

Received a critique
on Nevertheless from @Geezer
"that you must have heard the old phrase "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder." Well, it's true, I see it every day. What one person sees, is not always what another sees. You have been given excellent advice, in so muc…"
22 Sun

Posted a poem
Nevertheless
"Stroking the borders of society"
Open thread 36 lines
20 Fri

Received a critique
on Collection from @Geezer
"projection of this person, lets me think that this is about a young person who feels very alone. Not a part of the family, their opinions don't seem to matter. Maybe they are the youngest, or with no older siblings at a…"
20 Fri

Received a critique
on As I do from @Rosewood Apothecary
"At some underlying structure. It has a loosely repetitive quality to it. It’s easy to read but I did plow through some of your line breaks because the musician in me likes a recognizable pattern. I had to read it again…"
20 Fri

Posted a poem
Collection
"Beneath or above your liver"
Open thread 25 lines
19 Thu

Received a critique
on As I do from @Jackweb
"I like how the final cadence ended with the title. It makes the rhythm sound smooth. Beautifully crafted piece! ."
19 Thu

Posted a poem
As I do
"It's funny how a story starts"
Open thread 41 lines
18 Wed

Received a critique
on eternity from @Candlewitch
"excellent work! *hugs, Cat"
17 Tue

Posted a poem
eternity
"every day they looked and found;"
Open thread 4 lines
16 Mon

Posted a poem
Strings
"I do not wish to lie to you"
Open thread 22 lines
15 Sun

Posted a poem
Impediment
"They had told her from the start"
Open thread 15 lines
15 Sun

Highest posting month
January 2023 — 18 poems
14 Sat

Posted a poem
Discovery
"Everything rang in their ears all at once"
Open thread 45 lines
13 Fri

Posted a poem
A mother's intuition
"Laying the plate on the wooden table"
Open thread 25 lines
12 Thu

Posted a poem
Rose tinted lenses
"glasses on"
Open thread 36 lines
12 Thu

New follower
@Ekaterina Alexandrovna Sherbatskaya
11 Wed

Posted a poem
Ancestry
"I wish I could pass on the family name"
Open thread 12 lines
10 Tue

Posted a poem
The Chase
"thumping of feet on the ground"
Open thread 74 lines
03 Tue

First publication
Alive
03 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.