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Eden Guthrie
Member since November 23, 2022
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The untold
When you have no way
To stand up or sit
You find yourself towered
By emotional fits
With hardships untold
And worries unnumbered
The greatest loss
Is the one undiscovered
You blame yourself
And all whos to be
The one who's guilty
Of the crime you can’t see
Soon the truth unfolds
In later life
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And you are yet to decide
Whether you use a knife
To certain expenses
You get scared
But by others
You’ll be too tired to be repaired
From the trauma you faced
And blamed on god
You fought too hard
To be placed with some facade
The loved ones you worshiped
Will soon be in despair
To none would have thought
Life could be this unfair
Eden Guthrie’s timeline
- November 2023
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23 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2022
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28 MonReceived a critique
on The untold from @Geezer
"of little places to look at. And all [who's] to be. I would use a shorter version of the line: "Whether you use a knife." If you use a knife. Same for the line: "You'll be too tired to be repaired." Be too tired to be r…" -
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25 FriReceived a critique
on Not now not ever from @Lavender
"Hello, Eden, This is a universal theme we have all experienced in our lives, especially in our youth. I feel the angst. I like the title very much, it draws the reader in, and sums up the overall mood of the poem. I won…" -
24 ThuCritiqued
"Just A Dream [When I wake up in the morning]" by @Walten
"I liked everything about this poem. I love the melancholy touch to it and the way its put together" -
24 ThuCritiqued
"Memory of You" by @Lavender
"Great poem. I liked the vivid descriptions and how I felt you put a lot of thought into this. Amazinnggg!!!" -
24 ThuCritiqued
"Keep My Faith In God" by @Anthony Parker
"This was really good! I loved the structure and the way it came together and it felt very vivid and loved the concept of using god. Overall 10/10" -
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23 WedReceived a critique
on i wish from @Rosewood Apothecary
"The world is a costume party and I was embarrassed when I learned I attended with no costume. That’s paraphrased from someone else whom I’m at a loss to credit right at the moment. Perhaps Camus or Carl Jung. Furthermor…" -
23 WedReceived a critique
on i wish from @Candlewitch
"hello, it is very nice to meet you! from reading your poem, I can tell that you are a passionate and brave writer and poet. when you say that people don't see the real "you", I have to tell you that I understand you wel…" -
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23 WedCritiqued
"The Flash Back!" by @Kristen H.
"I LOVED this poem. It was so heartfelt and oddly relatable to me, great job honestly." -
23 WedCritiqued
"The Devil's Brain" by @Depressed 1
"This is like one of the best ones I've read to be honest. I love the structure and how it feels so effortless and just plain truth." -
23 WedFirst critique offered
on "The Devil's Brain" by @Depressed 1
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23 WedFirst publication
i wish
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23 WedPosted a poem
i wish
"I wish I could fly, to see the world how it truly is, to see it not from a distance but for it" -
23 WedJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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