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Herbert Whitaker
Member since September 5, 2022
Member for 3 years, 9 months
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Herbert Whitaker’s timeline
- September 2023
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05 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2022
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14 Wed
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13 TueReceived a critique
on The Music from @Triskelion
"a good start. If you're looking for constructive criticism, it's something that could be expanded on. Right now it reads like a grocery list. The bread The milk The butter The cheese The eggs etc... Nothing there for me…" -
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09 FriReceived a critique
on The Music from @RoseBlack
"Because of all those things...makes the hair on my arms stand up. The only place I can be myself! ." -
09 FriReceived a critique
on What is the Plan? from @Ray Whitaker
"We Whitakers are a creative lot! laughing….. Welcome to the site, looking forward to more of your work. Ray" -
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08 ThuReceived a critique
on What is the Plan? from @Ray Whitaker
"interesting piece you have. somewhat sad to contemplate, and a necessary realism. Nice to see another "Whitaker" here on Neo. I see you are from Australia, I'm in the USA. Could we be cousins somehow, way back? Ray" -
05 MonReceived a critique
on What is the Plan? from @Lavender
"Greetings, Herbert, I believe this is your first poem here, and you bring much to think over. I feel the despair and frustration, and also the shock of it all and the disgust in the reality. For me, this piece may be ab…" -
05 MonFirst publication
What is the Plan?
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05 MonJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Occasionally write poetry on current or recent world events. Write song lyrics as well which are basically just sung poetry.
Location: South Australia, AUS
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