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Raven4life
Member since June 28, 2022
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The Power of Both Sides
Super hero or villain
What a choice to make
The one everyone loves
Or the one they all love to hate
On one hand it would be great
To be the one who saves the day
Protects those who cannot protect themselves
Make the world just a little safer
On the other hand it would be more satisfying
To hide inside your pain and make them suffer
To rip every ounce of happiness from each fake
To repay those who have hurt you or used you
Oh but to be both now that would be the ultimate
By day help those who deserve help
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By night rip apart the users and fakes
With the Super power being the gift of knowledge
Knowledge of exactly who deserves being saved
Knowledge of who deserves being ripped apart
Being the one who saves those who deserve it
And also the destruction of all that do not
By day being the loved Super hero
By night being the hated villain
But no one knowing that I am both
The hero to those who are good by day
The villain avenger at night who rips apart the unworthy
Raven4life’s timeline
- June 2023
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28 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2022
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31 SunReceived a critique
on The Power of Both Sides from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Well done on your win! It’s loved this poem I’m really glad it got the attention it deserves (not to diminish the other submissions). I look forward to reading more. Tim" -
09 SatNew follower
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30 ThuNew follower
@Candlewitch
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28 TueReceived a critique
on The Power of Both Sides from @Jordyn Alyssa
"This is really good. It's nicely written and I really like how it captures the essence of two sides of a personality. Before I thought about that it kinda made me think of the movie Split, beautiful movie and James McAv…" -
28 TueReceived a critique
on The Power of Both Sides from @Geezer
"to the list of Anti-heroes, with Killer. He is a gourmet chef, a murder of rapists and pedophiles and a cannibal. He has been here for around 13 years. Well loved by most members. That said; I think that you have done w…" -
28 TueReceived a critique
on The Power of Both Sides from @Candlewitch
"great work! the question of which, or both? very inventive overall. have you ever considered having an alter ego? you have all the makings for one. your head is in the right place for it.my alter ego is named "eddy styx…" -
28 TueReceived a critique
on The Power of Both Sides from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Welcome to the site. Great job. I like duality and this piece is definitely that (so is most of life). I think it has to do with perception or the way we look at things. Now. The work is fine as is however, it suggests…" -
28 TueFirst publication
The Power of Both Sides
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About Me
About me
I love to write and I love nature
Writing to me is an outlet from all inner pain.
My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe.
Location: United States, USA
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Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| The Power of Both Sides | Super-hero or a Villain? | – |