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Zengoddess
Member since May 10, 2022
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My love, My pain
Love of my life,
You told me your name, I told you mine
You gave me your sweet words, I gave you smiles
You gave me butterflies, you gave me smiles
You promised me your heart, I promised you mine
Love of my life,
You gave me more happiness than money could buy
Your words were like seasoning that spiced up my life
Your touches like torches that light up the night
I can't stop thinking of your lips on mine
Love of my life,
It's been ages since I last heard from you
My limbs are weak from looking for you
My eyes are weak from crying for you
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My head is aching from thinking of you.
Love of my life,
I found you in the arms of another
Those arms that once caressed me now hold someone else
Those lips that once kissed me now pour forth venom
First you gave me butterflies and now you give me pain!
Zengoddess’s timeline
- May 2023
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10 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2022
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01 WedReceived a critique
on My love, My pain from @Geezer
"have recieved some good advice; you can use any or all of it or even a combination of it all. The pain of heartbreak! I would use the word [looking] instead of scouting I wouldn't use the word [another] so close to wher…" -
01 WedReceived a critique
on My love, My pain from @Jackweb
"The main functions of repetitions in poetry are to emphasis on a particular point. It makes it easier to understand. It brings the meaning, theme into some sense of focus. But it can also create a sense boredom and comp…" -
01 WedReceived a critique
on My love, My pain from @Candlewitch
"in these lines: I found you in the arms (of another) Those arms that once caressed me now hold another instead of the repetition, try: (I found you in the arms of someone new) these are my favorite lines: Love of my lif…" - May 2022
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31 Tue
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11 WedReceived a critique
on My Daughter from @Jackweb
"Beautifully composed poem. Keep the ink flowing. I believe, she will definitely hearken to this lovely instructions." -
10 TueReceived a critique
on My Daughter from @Mr joghe
"Hello I'm glad to say that your poem emphasizes the love of a mother to her daughter. More grace to your ink." -
10 TueReceived a critique
on My Daughter from @Candlewitch
"it is very nice to meet you. welcome to the home of Neopoet! my name is Cat. may I suggest a title change of,( "To My Darling Daughter" or "Dear Daughter", as you are addressing the poem to her.) this poem is full of lo…" -
10 TueFirst publication
My Daughter
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I am an introverted Taurus that loves creative writing.
Location: Nigeria, Enugu
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