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Luckscribe
Member since April 30, 2022
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IT IS HARD TO BREATHE
The forest sage proclaimed
"Our gate calls for a brave chain",
To the throne of the jungle
The ferocious pounce of crown tussle doubles.
But can our king be prince over bridges?
Even the hyena tales of mounting the door
Forgot his gluttonous lethal of his greeds,
Ah! Who do we give this rug?
Often the Viper voiced,his gaze is too high from our borders
His glaring stripes radiates far from breeders
And he can't beat our foes to the latter
This craving giraffe will bring to our fall, brothers.
The shiny complexity of his stripes said the lamb
Is like the rays of bitting strikes
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And our gate will often mourn from weighty mights
For the dusk can't hide a zebra's white,
Then who do our gate count on?
The pace of a cheetah and the tearing ptyalin of leopards will crown
Arise oh! Jungle judge,the Sylvan curled
Give to your led, this "lion trinity" to defend our glebe Lord.
Luckscribe’s timeline
- April 2023
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30 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2022
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23 MonReceived a critique
on IT IS HARD TO BREATHE from @Candlewitch
"your title has an error: breath should be (Breathe) *hugs, Cat" -
13 FriReceived a critique
on IT IS HARD TO BREATHE from @Candlewitch
"it is nice to meet you! Geezer has given you some great suggestions to apply. may you become a full member soon. *hugs, Cat" -
13 FriReceived a critique
on IT IS HARD TO BREATHE from @Geezer
"The sacred tribal sangomas proclaims our forests need to be Chained and closed to the leaders not to you and me Who does this prince think he is? The hyena thinks to make a door in his greed for bridges on the backs of…" -
12 Thu
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11 WedReceived a critique
on HER GLORIOUS CHAPTER from @Jackweb
"It is obviously an aphetic form of because. But in poetry it seems informal. So, the best way is to write in full ( because) or ('cause) instead of abbreviating it like " cos". Such style distorts a written piece!" -
11 WedReceived a critique
on HER GLORIOUS CHAPTER from @Mr joghe
"Hello, I like the structure of the poem. My observation is that you've deviated from the ryhme pattern in stanza 2 of the poem. 'Myself,the drop I couldn't manifest Bonds kept teeming in fret But we want this one flesh…" -
11 Wed
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11 WedReceived a critique
on MY MOTHER from @Candlewitch
"an excellent poem full of colorful imagery. I like these lines best: Oh! Mother just like a joyful Eagle I will glow in your nurture My mysteries will be defeated by hopes in the battle of your prayers And under your ca…" -
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07 SatReceived a critique
on BEAUTY WITHIN from @Candlewitch
"welcome to Neopoet, it is very nice to meet you. may your experiences here all be good. Race is a great poet and is wonderful at critique. he has said what needs to be, and there isn't much else I can say. may you enjoy…" -
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- April 2022
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30 SatFirst publication
EAGLES' PACE
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30 SatJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Ogbewu Goodluck idaa is a poet and an essayist who hailed from Nigeria.He goes with the pseudonym Luckscribe,my favourite poet is Dike chukwumerije.
What inspired me to write poems was the outbreak of COVID 19 .
Location: Nigeria
Favorite Poets
Dike chukwumerije
Woke Soyinka
William Shakespeare.
Recent Work
IT IS HARD TO BREATHE
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HER GLORIOUS CHAPTER
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MY MOTHER
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BEAUTY WITHIN
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EAGLES' PACE
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