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Clobro
Member since December 5, 2021
Member for 4 years, 6 months
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Watching.
It was watching.
This large creature, looming in the shadows
Had a spiteful look.
Eyes like reddish mirrors in the dark,
Two black horns.
Twisting and turning, they stood up high on its skull.
The creature hissed and opened its mouth,
Revealing rows upon rows of sharp teeth stained red with blood.
It was watching.
Glowing reflections in its red eyes,
And roaring fire in its heart.
The creature, with its slimy skin,
Looked almost like a whale with four legs.
Its tail had a metallic fin, split into two,
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Its edges sharp and stiff like a blade.
It was watching.
Prey.
The creature smirked, hate in its eyes.
Revenge at last.
It flicked its heavy tail down, waiting and waiting.
It crouched down, its eyes watching.
Its prey was reflected on the creature's mirrorlike eyes.
The creature was waiting,
Waiting for the right time.
To
Strike.
It leaped with powerful legs.
Its claws dug deep into the flesh of its prey.
Warm blood.
It let out an ear-piercing screech
And bit down
Into the human prey.
She had no time.
No time to scream,
No time to run,
Before it swallowed her.
And her body was reclaimed.
She screeched.
Another creature.
A replica,
And the original started to peel away
As her skin became its skin
And her face became its face.
It roared again.
It was watching.
Clobro’s timeline
- March 2023
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27 MonReceived a critique
on Watching. from @swamp-witch
"This is really fun, an unnerving attempt at horror for sure. I'm picturing some of the cryptids that have taken the Internet by storm lately: wendigos, mothman, skinwalkers, and others are very popular right now. Lots o…" - February 2023
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03 FriCritiqued
"The truth " by @Ebony Trafford
"The imagery is strong and I can feel the pain in this. Thank you for sharing." - January 2023
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31 Tue
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25 WedReceived a critique
on Straight ahead from @Rosewood Apothecary
"I like the words. I’m confused by the format. Was it your intention to have all those one word lines. Is that a device you’re using or did it just get posted that way accidentally. I certainly understand if you wanted t…" -
25 WedCritiqued
"Divided We Stand " by @Shelby Pryor
"You have a typo at Youjust don't get it. Also there are some double spaces. Aside from the formatting, it's a good poem! I agree with the message. Even if other people's opinions are different, they still deserve love." -
25 WedCritiqued
"Difference " by @Johnny Two Birds
"It's kind of hypnotic, and your rhythm is good! I feel like the stanzas don't have much to do with each other, though. What do you mean by nothing can ever be the same? Very interesting." -
25 WedFirst critique offered
on "Difference " by @Johnny Two Birds
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25 Wed
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25 WedReceived a critique
on losing to the flow from @Obadiah Grey
"You're doing ok ! just relax into it, Obi." -
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- December 2022
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05 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2022
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20 FriReceived a critique
on I had to crawl from @Race_9togo
"Perhaps lost on some. The title is good. I would make it the first line of the poem, too. I like your language use, but this "2^52+1314?" Might be lost on some people too. "two to the fifty-second power plus thirteen fo…" - March 2022
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12 Sat
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05 SatReceived a critique
on losing to the flow from @Candlewitch
"good poem...I love the last line! I think that the eyes speak volumes, a language all their own! it also says "take the time to see me!" good work! *hugs, Cat *" -
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- December 2021
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05 SunFirst publication
Faults
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05 Sun
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05 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am from British Columbia and I like science, math, programming, languages, writing, and poetry. ( i dont konw)
Location: Canada, BC, CAN
Favorite Poets
E. E. Cummings
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Watching.
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Straight ahead
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I had to crawl
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With you
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