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StoryMaker8931
Member since October 11, 2021
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Soft on the neck of either dove’s love, beyond such a beauty, there hides a haze. A hazy patch of blacks and blues, where ashes lay, woke. The nightlight from an open candle sits in silence, trapped in lifeless motion, as it awaits the sun beyond its metal feet. A frozen door handle, covered with moldy moss, acts as the dawning memory of a lock intended to close, but always remains open, as a child’s laughter re-paints flowers along a bedroom barrier. A gold treasury of memories can not always sparkle, so rescue the strong, for the platinum treasure is not so easily manipulated by frost.
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- October 2022
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11 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2021
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12 TueReceived a critique
on Echo from @c lynn brooks
"I love your wording of this poem. I could almost see this as the beginning of a story. I enjoyed your poem immensely May I suggest you leave out the explanation ,let your reader try to find the meaning in your words" -
11 MonFirst publication
Echo
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11 MonPosted a poem
Echo
"Soft on the neck of either dove’s love, beyond such a beauty, there hides a haze. A hazy patch of blacks and blues, where ashes lay, woke. The nightlight from an open candle sits in silence, trapped in lifeless motion, as it awaits the sun beyond its metal feet. A frozen door handle, covered with moldy moss, acts as the dawning memory of a lock intended to close, but always remains open, as a child’s laughter re-paints flowers along a bedroom barrier. A gold treasury of memories can not always sparkle, so rescue the strong, for the platinum treasure is not so easily manipulated by frost." -
11 MonJoined Neopoet
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About me
I am a eighteen year old who enjoys writing and sometimes uses writing to express my feelings when I can’t express my feelings through words. I am an enormous fan of fantasy books, and I love just getting away from humanity for a little while, even if its just for a brief time period. Reading helps me create novel ideas for stories and helps me with my writing language and spelling. I can be a little shy sometimes, but when around friends and family, I like to make them smile and laugh; I feel bad for those that I see upset, and I try my best to cheer up those who's hearts have been broken. I am sympathetic listener, and comforter!
Location: MB, CAN
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