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Rickey’s Rhymes
Member since August 21, 2021
Member for 4 years, 9 months
Delightful Dancing Dignitaries
Delightful dancing dolphins dip, douse
their dorsal
Elegant elephant’s elongated ears ebb
Little lambs leaping lilies laughingly
Lindy
Iconic impala ignites Irish improv
Graceful gazelle’s galloping gullies to
grapevine
Hallelujah hippopotamus hula hoops
Trashing trouts twist to turn the tide to
twirl tango
Furry fennec fox fabulously floss
foxtrots
Utopian unicorn unties umbrellas
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Lazy lizards lasso’s liscio lips
Daring dalmatian dog delivers dab
disco
Aggressive alligator aids awki awki
Naughty nocturnal natterjacks nods
nutbrushes
Cascading centipede circles can-can
cakewalk
Inactive icy ibisbills inch innaby
Nostril nurse-shark nocturnally
nizamikos
Glorious gorillas greet gliding and
grinding
Delicate dar dragonfly discos
dirty
Icky inchworm intentionally Israeli
Ginger giraffes grandiose go
ganggangsullae
Noticeable narwhal navigates
nabichum
Indian-scissor-bill incisors indlamu
Talkative toco toucan twists and
taps tango
Astonishing African aardvark Atlanta
Rhinoceros rock and roll the red river
jig
Isotopes isoptera inks Irish-step-dance
Elusive emus enjoys the electric-slide
Stylish seahorses slowly swing, strip and
square step
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AUTHOR’s NOTES
Title: Delightful Dancing Dignitaries © Rickey L Bennett 2021
WC: 157
SC: 12 / Line
Photo Curtesy of:
http://dark-horse-adaptations.blogspot.com/2013/01/funny-animals-dancing-new-pictures-2012.html?m=1
Rickey’s Rhymes’s timeline
- August 2022
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21 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2021
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11 SatReceived a critique
on Delightful Dancing Dignitaries from @Gracy
"Hi Rickey, clever poem. My view is that so many alliterations make it more like a tongue twister. Still, if that is your intention, let it be." -
11 SatReceived a critique
on Delightful Dancing Dignitaries from @Geezer
"is meant to be part of the Sept. contest, find the box to check and make sure that it is entered properly. I do see the thread of continuity, but only because I see the title says something about dancing and most of the…" -
10 FriReceived a critique
on Delightful Dancing Dignitaries from @c lynn brooks
"What I am seeing here are beautiful examples of alliteration ,however I am not finding anything cohesive about the lines" -
10 FriReceived a critique
on Pipe Bagpipes Pipe from @Obadiah Grey
"Hiya, Rick. I got the message from your notes,, Your piece allows the reader to draw his/her own conclusion as to what the piece is about; your notes takes that away. You don't find nationalism/borders abhorrent? I've s…" -
10 Fri
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on Pipe Bagpipes Pipe from @Obadiah Grey
"Staggeringly good poem, great use of poetic devices. A powerful, poignant piece. (Hate the glorification of nationalism, of war!) Obi." -
07 Tue
- August 2021
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25 WedReceived a critique
on Tolkien’s Transformers from @Geezer
"parameters for August are/is that it has to be a limerick. ~ Geez. ." -
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22 SunReceived a critique
on Tolkien’s Transformers from @scribbler
"Here I am named scribbler but you know me as Stan Holliday. Now to the poem. In my opinion a poem should pretty much stand by itself without needing a lot of explanation. I think this one could do so with a more concise…" -
21 SatFirst publication
Tolkien’s Transformers
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21 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Dr Rickey L Bennett an Ohioan native earned his doctorate from Regent University in 2010 while wrapping up his naval chaplaincy career in 2012. During his military service he wore our nation’s cloths while serving Airman, Soldiers, Marines, Sailors , Guardsmen and their dependents.
He states his first love is being a Christian, saved from sin’s punishment, power and eventual presence thru faith, by grace and on account of Jesus’ Blood shed on the cross on his behalf. His life scripture is Galatians 2:20.
Second, he’s proudly the husband to Teri his high school sweetheart and between the two of them have five kids and ten grandkids.
Third, he is a disabled four combat tour, retired Navy chaplain.
Fourth, he’s the author of “Poetic Views: Rediscovering Direction in Life”
Fifth, He’s the Founder and C.E.O. of C3 C.H.A.P.P.S. Ministry © Rickey L Bennett 2021.
Finally, I look forward to constructive criticism so that I can home my craft and hopefully I’ll be able to contribute positively to this group.
Location: Ohio, USA
My Top Twenty Poets:
Robert Browning
Elizabeth Barrett Browning
Robert Frost
EE Cummings
Oscar Wilde
TS Elliot
John Keats
Abraham Maslow
Percy Bysshe Shelley
Plato
William Shakespeare
Aristotle
Henry David Thoreau
Edgar Allan Poe
Jean Cocteau
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
George Eliot
Henry W. Longfellow
Voltaire
Ralph Waldo Emerson
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