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Ambrose Gibbs
Member since June 18, 2020
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the mind of peace
The things that comes to mind for the things I have to find blind, the odds against a dream that seems to be deemed a mind of greatness a savvy way of living for what god is giving. The mind over matter as life chatters across the land of life, to live for love far above a broken heart to find love in the dark to live is an art form to weather the storm to live in the norm a formality of a personality to walk casually among life itself, to be happy for good health, the stealth of highlands to take a quick glance of life to live through time. Let time be life, let time be in the moments of happiness the stress of living day to day far from a stray to live in many ways searching for happy days, to live to embrace the hard things to face, for a trace of grace to live in a empty space in this rat race, let time be the moments in life to search for glory another chapter in life's stories, in the mind of peace.
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18 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2021
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18 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2021
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27 TueReceived a critique
on the mind of peace from @Candlewitch
"I agree with the stanzas suggestion. that would make it smoother and easier to read, giving it pauses instead of being rushed into a long paragraph. Good title! and good thoughts. I hope my comment helps. always, Cat -" -
26 MonReceived a critique
on the mind of peace from @Michael Anthony
"Hi Ambrose, Thank you for sharing. Lots of good content here, but I would agree with C Lynn Brooks. Looking at some of your other work, considering the use of stanzas should really help your readers connect better with…" -
25 SunReceived a critique
on the mind of peace from @c lynn brooks
"It would make this easier to read if broken down into stanzas as poetry usually is will return to read" -
25 SunPosted a poem
the mind of peace
"The things that comes to mind for the things I have to find blind, the odds against a dream that seems to be deemed a mind of greatness a savvy way of living for what god is giving. The mind over matter as life chatters across the land of life, to live for love far above a broken heart to find love in the dark to live is an art form to weather the storm to live in the norm a formality of a personality to walk casually among life itself, to be happy for good health, the stealth of highlands to take a quick glance of life to live through time. Let time be life, let time be in the moments of happiness the stress of living day to day far from a stray to live in many ways searching for happy days, to live to embrace the hard things to face, for a trace of grace to live in a empty space in this rat race, let time be the moments in life to search for glory another chapter in life's stories, in the mind of peace." - August 2020
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01 SatPosted a poem
the things of life
"The mind of time for fresh air to breath, in the night of silence the mind of violence, for peace to live inside to decide life with pride life is a ride on a journey to the center of the earth for what life is worth the battle scares from the stars in the skies of pain when one cries For a moment of clarity the ability of agility to move in silence as the air of providence to commence a life under the fence, only to climb to the top of the world to sit outer space, a rat race to look down at, a world of destiny for the quest to be the best at humanity, for the sanity of the lost to be found for the bound of glory not another sad story. The mind over matter chattered across the glob to prob for a meaning. to find the healing power inside to take a ride through life, to be humble with little pride, to take a dive to the danger side to survive this life ride only as the sun set to find peace and beauty, the nature of air and flowers the showers of rain and pain as tears of fear waters the eyes as one cries only to be born to die. Life under the sun for fun and memories the rest of life is history." - June 2020
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24 WedPosted a poem
To stay alive
"the life of the mind to wind down in time, as age plays a role of change to grow old in time as time seems to hang around, to be bound by the the mind to find life outer bounds, as good as life sounds, life is hard to stand on a mound of joy, to be destroyed by pain to live in vain for sanity with empathy to understand to live on earth our human land. The power under neath the soul and spirit stay quiet to hear it, the wind of angels falls from the skies to realize the prize of life before you die, the eyes of the skies watches the moves upon us all to fall when we die, the beliefs of something not normal a formal question of faith, for the urge to purge against hate. The form of love to warm from above, the shadows of the seas to believe in what you see, not to be blind be facts that can be, a lost question that was never answered, for the days of living with cancer, for only a life to live to strive, a fight everyday to stay alive." -
18 ThuFirst publication
to live life
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