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Tolerantia
Member since March 1, 2020
Member for 6 years, 3 months
A bird on the Bird
Strolling through the paths of rooms-like
I saw a flying creature drenched
And leaning
Should I say leaning; probably not
The bird on the Bird
Appear to roost all alone
Briskly swiftly
The speed of my means increased
As the downpours proceeded
I returned seeing myself
Grinning in the desire for
Having sight of this creature
There again she was calmly
Looking at the individual of me
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I pulled up, zoomed her at
A distance
She realized I saw her
I saw she realized in me
That internal air
An internal air made it conceivable
This fledgling bird looked littler
And alive on the Bird
Tolerantia’s timeline
- March 2025
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01 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2021
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01 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2020
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14 TueReceived a critique
on IT'S LESS THOUGHTFUL from @Gracy
"Well done, but I think it needs prunning a little. You could write a far shorter poem and give the same religious message." -
11 Sat
- March 2020
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03 TueReceived a critique
on IT'S LESS THOUGHTFUL from @Eumolpus
"What does it have to do with poetry? Read Hopkins. Same message. But it’s poetry. You’ll see what I mean immediately..." -
01 SunFirst publication
IT'S LESS THOUGHTFUL
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01 Sun
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01 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Terence has this way of always finding the good and believing in everything despite all that he has been through.
He breaks all stereotypes and lives his life according to his choices. He is self-sufficient and takes care of everyone around him and encourages them to be also independent.
He lives one day of a time and never gives up because he believes that life is beautiful and there is always hope.
A mind-blowing rundown as TERENCE.
Truth be told, there is a great deal to find about me. Simply hit up, "Hi".
Location: Upper East Region, Ghana., GHA
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