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Hope21pilots
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Lines
Don't you ever hear parents tell their children,"why don't you try coloring IN the lines"? I feel there are no lines in the world. No one has a perfect life, so they don't have the lines to know when to stop coloring. Artists show optimistics in this situation. Optimistics think that everything is great. They think that we're all in the lines. Thats because if we color in the lines the picture is perfect and we are our own picture. The optimistics are wrong. Our picture's lines aren't going together right, so we can't finish our picture. We won't ever know what it's like to be perfect. Even if we end up in heaven, we will never know what it's like to be perfect. The lines are not going to get finished.
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Lines
"Don't you ever hear parents tell their children,"why don't you try coloring IN the lines"? I feel there are no lines in the world. No one has a perfect life, so they don't have the lines to know when to stop coloring. Artists show optimistics in this situation. Optimistics think that everything is great. They think that we're all in the lines. Thats because if we color in the lines the picture is perfect and we are our own picture. The optimistics are wrong. Our picture's lines aren't going together right, so we can't finish our picture. We won't ever know what it's like to be perfect. Even if we end up in heaven, we will never know what it's like to be perfect. The lines are not going to get finished." -
25 SatFirst publication
Your nothing, are you
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