wkamen

Member since November 17, 2016

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Timeless Love

Posted Jun 19, 2022 · 12 lines · 5 critiques

Waiting, longing for love, slowed time.
Quietly sitting dormant like a volcano,
the slow pace of time tormented my soul.
I failed to see the signs appearing before my eyes.

The passage of time, darkened my sorrow,
like the night sky bringing sadness to a few.
Day after day my soul bides time.
For all things to pass.

Time did not rest, finding love was quickly fading.
The cycle of time awakened my soul,
to a clear knowledge of a time past.
Bonding time and love eternally.

wkamen’s timeline

June 2022
20 Mon

Received a critique
on Timeless Love from @Jackweb
"The only thing that can make your poetry powerful and enticing is great imagery. I can confirm to you, it's obvious in this poem. And that's a good one. Keep searching for a true love. Tough time never last but tough pe…"
20 Mon

Received a critique
on Timeless Love from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Nice delivery. The wording has a certain amount ambiguity; are you asserting these statements or asking questions of yourself both conscious and unconscious. I suspect it’s both and that’s probably what I love about it…"
20 Mon

Received a critique
on Timeless Love from @Candlewitch
"welcome to Neopoet, if you have any questions about the website please just ask and I will answer, to the best of my knowledge. if I cannot help, we will find someone who can. about your poem, I like these lines: Time d…"
19 Sun

Posted a poem
Timeless Love
"Waiting, longing for love, slowed time."
Open thread 12 lines
November 2021
17 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
September 2021
06 Mon

Posted a poem
The Language Of Drunk (Acrostic Poem)
"Three sheets to the wind, the boat meanders"
Open thread 18 lines
August 2021
24 Tue

Posted a poem
Visions of Love
"Killin’ time, sippin’ a beer"
Open thread 38 lines
November 2017
17 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2016
21 Wed

First critique offered
on "Killing God" by @weirdelf
November 2016
17 Thu

First publication
Somewhere (since unpublished)
17 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.