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uglywill
Member since September 6, 2016
Member for 9 years, 8 months
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Castle of Light
Our castle is filled with jewels and crystal chandeliers.
Lasers flash on and off heightening my senses and fears.
Rainbows of light bounce off the white plaster dome.
In the morning, the sun light reflects off all the chrome.
The crystal prisms spin and flash colors so bright.
Like all fantasies, this dream is just God’s light.
I close my eyes and you are always in my sight.
uglywill’s timeline
- September 2021
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06 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2017
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06 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2017
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20 MonReceived a critique
on Alone from @swamp-witch
"I really like the imagery of this poem. Being surrounded by quiet, swimming in space, and other images evoke something gentle and whimsical for me, which I think is a lovely way to express what love is like. Love can be…" -
18 SatReceived a critique
on Castle of Light from @swamp-witch
"The imagery in this poem reminds me of a cathedral more than a castle! It's also a tiny bit psychedelic and ethereal, with flashing lights and glistening colors, isn't it? I am interested in learning the inspiration beh…" - November 2016
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07 MonReceived a critique
on Darkness from @themoonman
"Great content but ... this piece is missing the music, the smooth flow of words falling as they are read aloud. I suggest reading more poetry, Billy Collins is one of my favorite modern poets. Richard (themoonman)" -
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- October 2016
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23 SunReceived a critique
on Rhyme II from @bengt Frisk
"I agree with you about free verse and that a lot of feeling can be lost in the search of a perfectly structured poem.Why not mix it? Why not use the tools of poem like association saturated, dense expression and interna…" -
23 SunReceived a critique
on Rhyme II from @Candlewitch
"hello again! I noticed the line with "Love's Secret" there is a beautifully haunting poem by William Blake, titled "Love's Secret" I think you would like it. it can be "googled" just wanted to share that with you :) alw…" -
19 WedReceived a critique
on Rhyme II from @Keith Logan
"the rhythm, never quite settled, towards the end goes completely awry. Having said that, there is much to recommend a little rework to tidy the piece up." -
15 SatReceived a critique
on Rhyme II from @Candlewitch
"your language usage was good but the rhyming pattern became a bit muddled towards the end of the poem. to answer the question your poem poses is, no, great poetry does not have to rhyme. in fact, I am very fond of free…" -
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- September 2016
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15 ThuHighest posting month
September 2016 — 8 poems
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10 SatCritiqued
"Alchemist gold" by @Vivovon
"Burn is a valid analogy for what we do and all our efforts fail to achieve an impossible goal . It is in the effort to make a difference where the pot of gold resides." -
10 SatFirst critique offered
on "Alchemist gold" (since unpublished) by @Vivovon
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06 TueFirst publication
The Wall (since unpublished)
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06 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am a novice
Location: Hawaii Big Island USApoet . i have written about 100 poems and am waiting for new inspiration!
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I have never read poetry . I just sat down one day and started to write and after two years I had written 100 poems (free verse) and the inspiration to continue passed!
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