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Troy
Member since April 29, 2020
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The Story of an Outcast:(
Losing so much, asking myself, was I ever supposed to win?
Trying to fit, acting like someone else, still wouldn't let me in
Damaging mentally, but also have me slicing my skin
Tearing me down on the outside, so that I have no love for me within
No one sees it but in the mirror, a boy with tears is reflected
Although loneliness is my friend, it reminds me I am still neglected
I open my heart to the world, and it rejects it
I guess suicide is the only way I will be accepted
Troy’s timeline
- April 2025
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29 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2021
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29 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2020
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30 ThuReceived a critique
on The Story of an Outcast:( from @Simon
"It's nice poem that you brought up in here rhythm and rhyme are not easy to put though I appreciate those try that, Well sucuide is not an option for acceptance strongness is an answer. I rather learn how to fish than b…" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on The Story of an Outcast:( from @c lynn brooks
"welcome to Neo Poet Your poem has the rhythm of a rap song nice rhyming sad that you should feel this way though. Keep in mind that there is always something to live for no matter how small it is" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on The Story of an Outcast:( from @Gracy
"Hi Troy and welcome to neopoet. I'm also fairly new here. You have good knowledge of rhyming and you've deftly put your thoughts into two quartets. That's always a thumbs up for me! I dislike poems that go on forever. U…" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on The Story of an Outcast:( from @Geezer
"to have a working knowledge of poetry, a fair sense of pattern, rhythm and rhyme. I am not really fond of the theme and hope that those thoughts leave your head. I'm sure that at least a few people have told you that yo…" -
29 WedFirst publication
The Story of an Outcast:(
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29 WedPosted a poem
The Story of an Outcast:(
"Losing so much, asking myself, was I ever supposed to win?" -
29 WedJoined Neopoet
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I just started to write poems because of my teachers and peers encouraging me to try it.
Location: Missouri
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