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Torie
Member since October 21, 2017
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Cri de Coeur
Running as rivers
Soft as gleam
Maybe liquid
Maybe steel
Yet with a noble cause
No other way
Sign of strength
Seeking for will
Might be a boubou of regrets
Might be a call for what the soul rejects
Taciturn or a screech
All that matters is what the soul rejects
Might be against humanity’s law
But please make it raw
Void of emotions or flaming as hell
It all matters if it’s going to be recoil
Or proceeding exploits.
Torie’s timeline
- October 2022
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21 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2018
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21 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2017
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26 ThuReceived a critique
on Cri de Coeur from @Sparrow
"A lovely piece of what I will say is a protest, the flowing local dress depicted and used as a line that made it flow is great. One thing though, you are talking to a lot of us that being Westernised and from Europe hav…" -
26 Thu
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26 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Panic. " by @purple-hobbit
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23 MonReceived a critique
on Cri de Coeur from @swamp-witch
"Lovely imagery in this poem. I had to look up the meaning of the title and also the boubou. Are your referring it the bird or the garment? I think either would be intriguing: "a bird regret" or a "garment of regret". Yo…" -
23 MonReceived a critique
on Cri de Coeur from @Chiori
"nice poem, life is all about challenges, sometimes it is easy sometimes hard, but standing to it always give birth to success." -
22 SunFirst publication
Cri de Coeur
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22 Sun
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21 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
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a very eccentric oblique ink
Location: Abuja,Nigeria, NGA
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