T. Harmonee

Member since June 3, 2017

Member for 9 years

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32 Poems

67 Comments

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How The Phone Rings

Posted Jun 21, 2019 · 8 lines · 1 critiques

The phone rings
Like a belly dancer’s hips
The dings shake and shift
Back and forth,
Bashing me upside the head
Slipping into the quiet
Like tap shoes on a cedar floor
Each step kicking against my nerves

T. Harmonee’s timeline

June 2022
03 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2019
22 Sat

Received a critique
on How The Phone Rings from @tyro
"a short piece but rich in simile and metaphor. I like it."
21 Fri

Posted a poem
How The Phone Rings
"The phone rings"
Open thread 8 lines
December 2018
20 Thu

Received a critique
on Lost Heart from @zebra
"Your sentiment in this write is topical and universal and so I think a lot of people could relate to the despair if this poem. I would like you to consider that the feel of the piece is more narrative than poetic In my…"
18 Tue

Posted a poem
Lost Heart
"Somewhere along the road,"
Open thread 23 lines
12 Wed

Received a critique
on Hungry as a Dog from @Geezer
"to immortalize the hungry dog! Yes, that was they reason that they threw in their lot with man! We fed them and wolves became dogs! ~ Geezer. ."
12 Wed

Posted a poem
Hungry as a Dog
"Never seen anything as hungry as a dog"
Open thread 12 lines
June 2018
03 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
August 2017
15 Tue

Highest posting month
August 2017 — 8 poems
June 2017
08 Thu

First critique offered
on "The Intercessor (June contest)" by @Rula
03 Sat

First publication
The Cure
03 Sat

Most-discussed work
The Cure

14 critiques to date.
03 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I've been writing poetry since 2003, mostly when inspired. For the last couple of years I've been trying to improve my poetry mainly by reading. I've been to a couple workshops and readings. I haven't had any prior teaching for writing.

Location: United States, USA

Favorite Poets

Billy Collins

Maya Angelou

Lucille Clifton

Gwendolyn Brooks

Lang Leav