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SunDust
Member since December 13, 2015
Member for 10 years, 5 months
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Time
As time goes by ,
I think of how things
Have Changed,
Buildings crumble and fall
To the ground,
Paving the ground for brave
New days,
My mind aches
from memories of Good times
And friends,
And I notice I've slowed down a bit,
As old age creeps it's way in ,
As Time ticks away ,
I can feel my body
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Grow Shallow and frail,
For I know that someday I'll
Leave this body
Nothing more than an empty shell,
But until then I'll just
Enjoy my life,
Sitting back watching time
Pass me by.
SunDust’s timeline
- December 2025
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13 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2020
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13 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2016
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13 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2015
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13 SunReceived a critique
on Time from @scribbler
"Yep growing old is not for the young. It takes years and years of experience to be able to deal with it lol. Welcome to Neopoet........stan" -
13 SunReceived a critique
on Time from @wesley snow
"I hope you take advantage of us. I liked the poem (rather related to it) even though I'm not a fan of verso libre. I'm a structured sort of guy. If I could offer a critique it would be that starting each verse with a ca…" -
13 SunFirst critique offered
on "TIME MACHINE" by @scribbler
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13 SunFirst publication
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13 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I've been writing off and on , for over 10 years, although it's been a long time , I am now at the point in my life that I would like to get back in the groove , I consider myself a Gothic poet but I have many different aspects
Location: Wv, USA
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