Stone Fox

Member since April 16, 2017

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Glory

Posted Jul 15, 2020 · 8 lines · 1 critiques

Tonight I will be naked
so you can witness me in all my glory.

No touch burns greater than that of your eyes.

I can feel my blood rush under my skin to a
burning glow where your eyes linger..

Time has no meaning when we are like this.

Tonight I will be naked..
So we can embrace in our Glory.

Stone Fox’s timeline

April 2022
16 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2021
21 Sun

Received a critique
on We Explore Our Island from @Arrow
"nightmare. I felt the sickening, never-ending horror of it all. I particularly liked the television show reference. I am not a fan of the ellipsis but to each his or her own. I found the poem hits its mark. Reminded me…"
July 2020
15 Wed

Received a critique
on Glory from @Geezer
"to the imagination and there is nothing so erotic as the thought of what might be. So glad to see you back and writing again. ~ Geezer. . ."
15 Wed

Posted a poem
Glory
"Tonight I will be naked"
Open thread 8 lines
November 2019
28 Thu

Received a critique
on Song of Muses from @Edna Sweetlove
"Oh dear."
27 Wed

Received a critique
on Song of Muses from @themoonman
"Cool title, drew me in for the read. I agree with the others, it could stand to be longer but in my opinion, stands pretty well as it is. One suggestion, remove "muses" from the last line, no need to spoon feed."
27 Wed

Received a critique
on Song of Muses from @Geezer
"the others, I would like to see an additional line. Nice. ~ Geezer. ."
27 Wed

Received a critique
on Song of Muses from @c lynn brooks
"if this is not one of the asian styles then I would like to see more added to this as I like your words"
27 Wed

Received a critique
on Song of Muses from @Sparrow 42
"Is there the final line missing, There is a Japanese Form of 5-7-5 7-7 syllables. Tanka I believe , A form of Japanese verse in five lines of 5, 7, 5, 7, and 7 morae. 1996, Makoto Ueda, Modern Japanese Tanka: An Antholo…"
27 Wed

Posted a poem
Song of Muses
"hold me in your eyes"
Open thread 4 lines
October 2019
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Your Turn from @Geezer
"of the dark side. I like what you have done here, but think it could be a bit smoother. I feel that you can make a few adjustments and get a much easier read. 1]. Make it in the present tense all the way through. It giv…"
08 Tue

Posted a poem
Your Turn
"I prefer the shadows these days."
Open thread 22 lines
September 2019
18 Wed

Posted a poem
Fatal Air
"Unless air is fatal to those who breathe, you should have nothing to fear. The safest way of surviving Fatal Air is to steal a few handfuls of blazing air."
Open thread 7 lines
August 2019
24 Sat

Posted a poem
We Explore Our Island
"Without the Night,"
Open thread 20 lines
July 2018
07 Sat

Posted a poem
Tasseled Dreams
"The thought of the future we will never have was pollinating foul fuzzy particles in the air,"
Open thread 25 lines
June 2018
25 Mon

Posted a poem
Beast of Burden
"A Beast of Burden"
Open thread 16 lines
21 Thu

Posted a poem
Call Me Medusa
"These sleazy intentions"
Open thread 29 lines
07 Thu

Posted a poem
Curious Natures
"In a more weak world the most aggressive advantages"
Open thread 16 lines
April 2018
16 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2017
20 Wed

First publication
Divine Musings
20 Wed

Posted a poem
Divine Musings
"In the most unusual manic-panic creep,"
Open thread 25 lines
April 2017
16 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 248 days later.