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Stevo
Member since September 2, 2023
Member for 2 years, 10 months
Cape Porcupine
The sun over Cape Porcupine on this warm summer’s eve,
Shows no hint of sadness, though she knows it's time to leave.
Hours have turned to minutes and now she's fading fast,
She looks forward to the future without pining for the past.
A brilliant t display of colour now lights up the sky,
One last parting gift as she finally says goodbye.
I witness her decention from just across the bay,
And all of us who love her are wishing she could stay.
Our world revolves around her, she’s always been our guide,
I believe she’s waiting for us, somewhere on the other side.
She's been around forever, no need for grief or sorrow,
I'll see her once again when tonight becomes tomorrow.
Now a full moon takes her place and it tries to fill the void,
I appreciate its efforts, but somehow I feel annoyed.
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It hangs like an amateur where a masterpiece once hung,
Many others find it beautiful so I’ll try to bite my tongue.
It serves a useful purpose, that cannot be denied,
It has inspired many poets and it regulates the tide.
And while the sun no longer shines, I still can feel her heat,
That will be my consolation until once again we meet.
Stevo’s timeline
- July 2026
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16 ThuReceived a critique
on Cape Porcupine from @Lavender
"Hello, Stevo, A gentle homage to the sun, especially during sunset. I enjoyed the personification. I agree with AI regarding the two typos being a distraction, but they can be easily mended. I tried to look up images of…" -
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- March 2025
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- February 2025
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05 WedReceived a critique
on Tongue in Cheek from @Lavender
"Hello, Stevo, Yep, I agree! This is a good one. Thank you, L" -
05 WedReceived a critique
on Tongue in Cheek from @Geezer
"This flowed well and I liked the ending lines. (The ones in your head). The theme is well represented here. -Geez ER. ." -
05 WedReceived a critique
on Tongue in Cheek from @Rula
"Much enjoyed this read. I am sure you meant the one in my mind :) Thank you for sharing!" -
05 WedReceived a critique
on Tongue in Cheek from @Ruby Lord
"Ha ha your poem deserves a round of applause. I enjoyed your punch line especially. Ruby xx" -
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- January 2025
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24 FriReceived a critique
on Enlightenment from @Ray Miller
"It's a measure of my world-weariness that I enjoyed the opening stanza best and would have liked to stand on its own." -
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23 ThuReceived a critique
on Enlightenment from @Lavender
"Hello, Stevo, A beauty with every word. Wonderful to read this today, and appreciate its message. The pace and rhyme were nice and easy. Very nice, L" -
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- October 2024
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16 WedNew follower
@mark
- September 2024
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02 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2024
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26 FriPosted a poem
The Fork In The Road
"Her car had careened off the road and had launched over an embankment." -
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- June 2024
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- February 2024
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10 SatNew follower
@Clentin
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09 FriCritiqued
"Acid, Really? But I Hardly Even Smoke Pot! (Reworked)" by @Candlewitch
"Your style is much different than mine but I really liked it" - December 2023
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- September 2023
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15 FriHighest posting month
September 2023 — 11 poems
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04 MonNew follower
@RoseBlack
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04 Mon
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04 MonFirst critique offered
on "The Woman and The Reaper" by @RoseBlack
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02 SatFirst publication
Ten Years Later
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02 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About the author
I started writing poetry as a young teenager with a vivid imagination. They weren’t very sophisticated but they were a bit funny. Many of those early poems have disappeared over the years but I began cataloging the more recent ones. I’ve also written some scripts for our local theatre group and a couple of short stories. I’ve even tried my hand at songwriting but unfortunately I’m no musician. Every poem you’ll find here was inspired by something. It may have been an observation, a news story, a song or a personal experience. I hope you enjoy reading them…Stevo
Location: Cape Breton, Canada
Recent Work
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