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Spatius
Member since May 15, 2023
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Alive again
Laying lifeless in a distant field
there i was
empty inside, beat down
my heartbeat faded with every breathe
my heartbeat grew more silent with time
with my last gaze at the setting sun
there lay an alluring figure
a prepossessing sight for my lifeless eyes
a bolt of lightning struck my fading heart
a rush of adrenaline ran through me
goosebumps formed on my frail skin.
i felt alive again, a love war veteran had,
had suddenly pummeled through his fears
for a long time i had given up, been shot,
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shot down by Love and women
a smile from this figure rekindled my fire
a voice from this Bod took away my doubts
the sense she spoke restored my senses
i could feel again, i could smile, i could love
You natured me back to life
you gave me purpose
a reason to get up and pray everyday
to love you with each passing second
Spatius’s timeline
- May 2024
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15 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2023
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16 TueReceived a critique
on Alive again from @Ruby Lord
"Hi Spatius, I enjoyed your poem and I felt the bolt of lightning charge your heart in your poem. The ending was great and it led the reader to hope, always a good thing, we want to experience your desires, wants and nee…" -
15 MonReceived a critique
on Alive again from @Lavender
"Greetings, Spatius, Welcome to Neopoet! You have the framework for a very moving poem. I can feel the "coming alive" charge! You have described the sensation of a new love, and the joy and energy it brings, especially t…" -
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About Me
About me
I am no more than a Lost soul, Learning the world and it's fundamentals, cruising through everyday like a new creation. i know a lot but at the same time i know nothing. Just a Grad student in Botswana, southern Africa who loves and writes as an escape from the hurt and struggle in my life. Poetry is my shoulder to cry on.
Location: Botswana, BWA
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