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Sky Lighter
Member since July 10, 2020
Member for 5 years, 10 months
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Raw Shock (RorschachTest)
Turning somersaults on the stage
he pointed his trombone straight
at me.
Like a contortionist, he captured me
with his sultry moves
and alluring beats,
he twisted his head and
swayed his hips
pursed his lips, as if
sucking a lollipop
then he stopped
his frame a butterfly, then a bee.
looked again, he was a tree.
Sky Lighter’s timeline
- July 2025
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10 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2021
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10 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2020
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12 SunReceived a critique
on Raw Shock (RorschachTest) from @c lynn brooks
"what a beautiful way of wording it" -
11 SatReceived a critique
on Raw Shock (RorschachTest) from @Gracy
"Hi Sky, I once took that test before working for a company. I saw all sorts of things, some was sexy stuff. I peeked at the report (it was in my boss's desk) and it said "highly femine!...lol. I'm very interesting in th…" -
11 SatNew follower
@c lynn brooks
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11 SatReceived a critique
on Raw Shock (RorschachTest) from @c lynn brooks
"4th line I believe you can drop the "me" as you have two me's to close together perhaps: use my inner being use it or not interesting outlook on things a warm welcome to neo poet I am sure you will find it a homey atmos…" -
11 SatReceived a critique
on Raw Shock (RorschachTest) from @Geezer
"only one concert like that! I went to a Kiss concert with about 40 others on one of those bus deals and someone broke out a bottle of liquid acid and we smoked at least an ounce of weed and drank a couple of cases of be…" -
11 SatFirst publication
Raw Shock (RorschachTest)
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11 Sat
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11 SatCritiqued
"Spoonerism (June Contest)" by @Lavender
"Your poem tickles my imagination! I love it!! It was an amazing experience, like going through a brain maze, coming out on the other side with nothing but glee!" -
11 SatFirst critique offered
on "Spoonerism (June Contest)" by @Lavender
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10 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am an evangelist, Education Consultant, Natural Health Consultant, children's book writer and poet.My purpose is to send light, love and healing into the universe in an innovative, creative and effective way.
Location: U.S.A.
Favorite Poets
Walt Whitman
Mya Angelou
Nikki Giovanni
Langston Hughes
Shel Silverstine
Robert Frost
Phyllis Wheatly
Robert Barrett Browning
Elizabeth Barrett Browning
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