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Shyanne18
Member since May 28, 2013
Member for 13 years
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I can't bleach my soul.
No, I can't hide these stains.
My thoughts are so dark.
Look into the mirror I see a shark.
The biggest bully to leave a mark.
I can't burn away the pain.
No, not a big pretender.
I see thing as they are not as you want.
Sometimes I can't fight the realness.
It's a fucking illness.
Heart stuck in toxic stillness.
Shyanne18’s timeline
- May 2023
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28 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2019
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06 FriReceived a critique
on Untitled from @c lynn brooks
"would you have a child and not name it Please titles are easy to find look in the body of your work ask yourself what was gooing through my mind at the time but please you have created something wonderful here give it a…" - November 2019
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26 TueReceived a critique
on Untitled from @c lynn brooks
"I agree with Richard on his one. I never title a poem until it is written then find it in the body but please never leave a poem untitled it is like having achild and not naming it lo" -
26 Tue
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25 MonReceived a critique
on Untitled from @themoonman
"Great opening line, I don't even believe in a soul but most do and what a grabber line !!! After your first stanza you seem to drift from the theme or change ... I'd suggest working on bringing it together, deciding if…" -
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- October 2018
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07 SunReceived a critique
on Horror House (Hell House) from @Shadowdancer3349
"This is a powerful write. I cringed" -
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- August 2018
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16 ThuReceived a critique
on Is This Growing Up from @Geezer
"many of us out here, that have little or no formal training in the art. There are also many that haven't read or care to read the masters. No shame in being self-taught! It does help to listen to the readers of your wor…" -
14 TueReceived a critique
on Is This Growing Up from @Geezer
"as I used it means fitting or proper. I find it increasingly frustrating to think that there are people out there, that do not possess or have access to a dictionary. I guess Google never heard of the word? ~ Geezer. ." -
12 SunReceived a critique
on Heart Disease from @raj
"feeling of insecurity pretty vividly expressed in this poem with good choice of words... life is good...stay good..feel secure..may your heart be at ease…" -
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- May 2018
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28 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2017
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21 Tue
- August 2017
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23 Wed
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23 WedCritiqued
"Masked Intentions" by @brittle light
"I think this is the beginning an intense poem. I feel like I could get more into it if I know the subject matter. Unless it's through the eyes of the beholder." -
23 WedCritiqued
"The Answer" by @top.ksgnr
"Felt like I was reading this climactic speech/poem. I like that you have kept up with the times and the goings on and made it an out spoken art piece." -
23 WedCritiqued
"Ode To Coffee" by @T. Harmonee
"I thought this made a image of a beautiful morning painted in my head. It was so lovely and made me feel warm. When I got to the numbers I felt like in interrupted the flow. Great poem God bless" -
23 WedCritiqued
"Ode To Coffee" by @T. Harmonee
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- April 2016
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04 MonNew follower
@Esker
- March 2016
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25 FriCritiqued
"Sound of a Poem" by @raj
"No problem I don't have a lot of time but I try and be a part of things" -
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15 TueHighest posting month
March 2016 — 5 poems
- August 2014
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02 SatNew follower
@alidzain
- July 2014
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31 Thu
- May 2014
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28 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2013
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31 FriFirst critique offered
on "A Rhyming Sestina (theory of relativity workshop)" by @wesley snow
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28 TueFirst publication
River
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28 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I see the world as living and breathing. I respect nature, but I am not a vegetarian. I believe in the power of self esteem. I think anyone who is part of the conspiracy to destroy the individual deserves to be blown open and cold busted. Always be yourself don't change for anyone. Laugh at everything because it's always funny. May God bless you and keep you.
Location: Omaha NE, USA
Favorite Poets
Too many to list. All from Frost
Thoreau
and Dickenson
Bukowski
and William Blake let me see the world in a grain of sand. The poem that inspired me to write poetry is In Flanders Field.
Recent Work
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Horror House (Hell House)
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Is This Growing Up
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Cellar Door
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Cricket
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Heart Disease
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ARKANSAS DREAM
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Empathize
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Call Girl
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