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Sheba
Member since August 31, 2014
Member for 11 years, 9 months
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Old friends after all these years.
Time lost, draws us near.
Like precious stones, from years past,
You lost your memory, your stones were cast.
Heaven didn't need you, on that grueling day,
When your truck veered astray.
Our path was broken, you wanted to remember,
To repair that which had been splintered.
I reminded you of each stone, how precious they were,
Like alabaster and myrrh.
One word you uttered, you called me "kid,"
A nick name I so adored, not forgotten nor forbid.
It was the most special stone to be consoled,
That which was a part of your inner soul.
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We will stand together in life's renew.
Our friendship so close is because of you.
Love will abide, take it all in stride.
I am your "North- Star,"
Let my light shine within you, where ever you go,
Near or far.
Sheba’s timeline
- August 2024
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31 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- August 2019
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31 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2017
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01 Fri
- August 2015
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31 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2014
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16 TueReceived a critique
on Ray from @wesley snow
"but I like the rhyme. Don't stop producing new works. You have a ready audience." -
16 TueReceived a critique
on Ray from @Roscoe Lane
"A very moving poem, a tribute to a good friend. Love Roscoe..." -
15 MonReceived a critique
on Ray from @wesley snow
"Don't stop asking for help until the problem is solved. Someone around here can get it to work sooner or later." -
13 Sat
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13 SatReceived a critique
on Ray from @themoonman
"So you figured it out, no need to contact the technical team? Are you happy with the layout, does it look better, does it now indicate your read aloud?" -
12 Fri
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12 FriReceived a critique
on Ray from @themoonman
"I like your poem as well but feel there is still room for improvement. I see no need for the spacing between the lines, if you are going to use spacing (and I do recommend using it), use it to enhance a stop or pause in…" -
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11 ThuCritiqued
"Do you remember...Jolly.....Sally...... Dramatics of SnowmanCHRISTENED THEM" by @lovedly
"Than you, I will do that. You are a bold writer and most pleasant." -
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10 WedCritiqued
"Do you remember...Jolly.....Sally...... Dramatics of SnowmanCHRISTENED THEM" by @lovedly
"This was a little different for me but i like it." -
10 WedCritiqued
"sorry and retort a re-thought!" by @lovedly
"I have to agree with mand, I like this very much. Friendship poems are my favorite, nice job." -
10 WedFirst critique offered
on "sorry and retort a re-thought!" by @lovedly
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07 Sun
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02 TueNew follower
@lovedly
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01 MonFirst publication
The Mask
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- August 2014
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31 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am a beginner at poetry.
Location: S.D., USA
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| Storytelling in Verse: A Study in Pink. | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2014-09-26 | Concluded |