Shamoneness

Member since October 23, 2012

Member for 13 years, 7 months

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37 Poems

55 Comments

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The Road

Posted Feb 2, 2016 · 18 lines · 2 critiques

The road is a grey
misty fog
an enigmatic stream
leading us to ambiguity
Beauty awaits around
corners of mindsets
set in tranquil reachings
tangling stairs
going up or
down dependencies
on windowlit sight
to cocoon and become
to wallow in idle
stagnance
Better to walk a misty road
that ends in light
than to run through a bright
road that ends in death

Shamoneness’s timeline

October 2022
23 Sun

Anniversary
10 years of membership
October 2017
23 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2016
03 Wed

Received a critique
on The Road from @Eduardo Cruz
""The road less taken" everyone goes after glimmer, but in the end it burns out like a candle. The road less taken is not always well paved. but there's always less obstacles to contend with. I live my life that way, I d…"
03 Wed

Received a critique
on The Road from @Geezer
"sure about what this implies, but see some promise here. I think you might try to make it a little clearer what this is about. ~ Geezer"
02 Tue

Posted a poem
The Road
"The road is a grey"
Open thread 18 lines
November 2015
18 Wed

Received a critique
on Him from @wesley snow
"I just say what I think and since I'm a pussy cat it usually turns out nice. Even the bad stuff. Verso Libre... what can I say? I need structure and form, but that is my struggle. I'm seeking help and your poem is good…"
18 Wed

Posted a poem
Wednesday
"i just want a taste of a soul"
Open thread 29 lines
September 2015
08 Tue

Posted a poem
Infantile
"Perceptual infantality"
Open thread 12 lines
October 2013
23 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
November 2012
25 Sun

Most-discussed work
Fictional Character

12 critiques to date.
15 Thu

Highest posting month
November 2012 — 8 poems
October 2012
24 Wed

First publication
Illusions
23 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 2 days later.