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Orange Sky
Orange sky,
That wicked red that burns against all life,
Scorching that soul in our eyes,
And driving all men mad,
All sane notions cast into the sea,
Happiness left to fizzle,
And fade,
Into that haze,
Orange sky,
That leaves me wanting your embrace,
Leaves me to cry,
Pray,
Rage,
And Drown in my faith,
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That orange sky,
Which wraps around the mountains,
Teaches all that life forgot,
Tortures me with all its might,
And leaves me all alone in July,
Orange sky,
Leaves me with a heartache,
Leaves me to rage,
That lovely orange sky,
Who doesn’t say goodbye,
Leaves no trace,
I’ll miss you in the night,
And wait for you in the morning,
To fill me once more with life.
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- December 2021
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04 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- July 2017
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22 SatReceived a critique
on Orange Sky from @Pugilist
"With the exception of the last line of stanza three, aside from preferring a few periods in the first three stanzas, I believe you have a solid piece of work. The last line, "And leaves me all alone in July," is unfocus…" -
17 Mon
- April 2017
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25 TueReceived a critique
on From the Soil from @weirdelf
""I heard the hellfire roar A scourge of hatred A vicious plot" Primitive anthropomorphism. The rest is good, the resilience of life." -
25 Tue
- December 2016
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04 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2016
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25 ThuReceived a critique
on We and our Mountains from @Vivovon
"The good old days, we always say so. A long history and civilization only the mountains can remember well. Armenia civilization has deep roots in antiquity. It is always a painful event when one has to leave the ancient…" -
24 Wed
- December 2012
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04 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2012
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15 WedHighest posting month
February 2012 — 6 poems
- December 2011
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25 SunFirst critique offered
on "in the presence of joy " by @Seren
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04 SunFirst publication
The Dialogue
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04 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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