Santita

Member since September 22, 2017

Member for 8 years, 8 months

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1 Poem

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September 2022
22 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
September 2018
22 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
September 2017
25 Mon

Critiqued
"SIMPLE LOGIC" by @Ja Ja
"Hi, Great piece. I enjoyed the content & theme. I think punctuation in poetry is a tricky thing. You have do 100%, or none at all. I think it read fine, but I am a novice, & still learning! Thanks for sharing."
25 Mon

First critique offered
on "SIMPLE LOGIC" by @Ja Ja
24 Sun

Received a critique
on Puppeteer from @Chiori
"I enjoy the poem, welcome to the site"
23 Sat

Received a critique
on Puppeteer from @Geezer
"the line I was referring to is: "makes [your only] puppet laugh", which would make the line: "makes this puppet laugh" ~ Gee. ."
23 Sat

Received a critique
on Puppeteer from @lovedly
"newcomer Let me also welcome you. I like your sweet poetry Here are a few suggestions only you may review as you wish, 'tis your poem O puppeteer.... if you view http://www.dictionary.com/ similar words called ‘’synonym…"
22 Fri

Received a critique
on Puppeteer from @Eumolpus
"I like your poem, and read it a few times. It reads well but I have a few questions. I always seek the soul of a poem, to have enough offered by the poem so it expands with meaning, poetic or otherwise. As the puppeteer…"
22 Fri

Received a critique
on Puppeteer from @swamp-witch
"Welcome to the site! Happy to see that your friend recommended this place. I think Gee and Jess have given you some sound feedback to get you started on any changes you decide to implement. If I could add my own, I woul…"
22 Fri

Received a critique
on Puppeteer from @weirdelf
"I see Geezer has given you some excellent feedback already. I suspect he was referring to the last line You're now a one man show. Replacing 'now' with 'only' or 'just' You'll find that all the poets here take a differe…"
22 Fri

Received a critique
on Puppeteer from @Geezer
"I hope that you find what you came looking for. I was attracted your poem by the title, so I guess that you can call that a success. Your language is good and I thought that the pattern showed some good instinct. The th…"
22 Fri

First publication
Puppeteer (since unpublished)
22 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

Santita

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"SIMPLE LOGIC" by @Ja Ja

on "SIMPLE LOGIC" by @Ja Ja

on Puppeteer from @Chiori

on Puppeteer from @Geezer

on Puppeteer from @lovedly

on Puppeteer from @Eumolpus

on Puppeteer from @swamp-witch

on Puppeteer from @weirdelf

on Puppeteer from @Geezer

Puppeteer (since unpublished)

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