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samary
Member since September 2, 2019
Member for 6 years, 9 months
I was lucky
I have long known the click of keys,
the clack of heels and ‘hurr’ of laboured
breath as joggers slap
and cough down winding paths.
I know the taffeta rustle as trees
in full leaf betray the expectant breeze.
How familiar ferries blare through clanking yachts and how the slap and slosh
of their wake washes the harbour rocks.
I feel the ground beneath me tremble
as a passing subterranean train races on
and the old earth exhales through crackling grass.
I have known this city, but until now
I did not know this hand, weightless as fog
in the dip above my hip
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I did not know that in reverent silence
he would lean towards me
or how suddenly I would be kissed.
I know serendipity mixed with lucky fortune
Samantha
samary’s timeline
- September 2024
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02 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2023
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04 TueReceived a critique
on I was lucky from @Geezer
"on being lucky! I have a wonder, is the "He" the city? Or maybe where you met your partner? I like the line about the weightless hand of fog that rests in the dip before your hip. It fits, no matter the truth of identit…" -
04 Tue
- May 2021
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10 Mon
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05 WedReceived a critique
on Days of Spring from @Ray Whitaker
"A poem that describes a hunted animal... I found this very imteresting. Who is the pheasant in your life? The death so described..." - April 2021
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29 Thu
- January 2021
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29 Fri
- September 2020
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02 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2019
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06 Fri
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05 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Climate Change (which one first or second)" by @lovedly
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02 MonFirst publication
La Giralda (since unpublished)
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02 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I am a poet, writer and poetry mentor.
Location: Uk, GBR
Recent Work
I was lucky
Days of Spring
Storm Trigger
Haiku
Lines and stanza
Light my Fire
Poem for the Metre workshop
Riding the Storm
Contest Wins
This member has not yet won any contests.
Workshops
| Skill level: | ||||
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| NARRATIVE POETRY SHOP (Let's get started) | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2021-04-17 | Concluded |
| Rhythm and Meter in Poetry | (syllabus) | Plunge Pool | Started 2020-02-10 | Concluded |
| Critique For New And Old | (syllabus) | Plunge Pool | Started 2020-01-16 | Concluded |
| Prose as poetry: the prose-poem | (syllabus) | Plunge Pool | Started 2019-12-04 | Concluded |
| Immersing the Reader Via Imagery Part 2 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2019-09-22 | Concluded |
| Immersing the reader via imagery (Let's get started) | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2019-09-16 | Concluded |