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saha
Member since June 23, 2023
Member for 2 years, 11 months
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Lost
lay as I sleep
falling into dark abyss
no path to tread
a bottomless pit
stumbling around
I search and search
for a guiding light
somewhere inside
saha’s timeline
- June 2024
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23 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2023
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04 Tue
- June 2023
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28 WedReceived a critique
on Lost without you from @Geezer
"As you can see, your post showed up as many times as you posted it. Sometimes your connection may be a little slow, wait for a minute to see if it shows up. Most times, I will go away from the post and look at something…" -
27 Tue
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26 MonReceived a critique
on Lost without you from @Geezer
"I really like the metaphors used here, the loss of a lover being likened to winter and the cold. I am not really thrilled with the use of F.B. abreviations, like [u ll, n ]. Are you not important, why do you use i to ma…" -
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25 SunPosted a poem
Lost without you
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25 SunPosted a poem
Lost without you
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24 SatReceived a critique
on will you go? from @Edward nigma
"The things I found interesting about this poem is the imagery brings a lot of images to the mind., but that being said not everything comes without it’s without it’s flaw. Honestly, I agree with geezer that it has to ha…" -
23 FriReceived a critique
on will you go? from @Obadiah Grey
"Sirens of the stars??? or, lets take a sneaky peek at an adventure? Whatever, its quirky! Interested, Obi." -
23 FriReceived a critique
on will you go? from @Geezer
"wording of your piece, leaves it wide open in intent. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I think that it could be made much more interesting by giving it some purpose. Even the definition of "they" might bri…" -
23 FriFirst publication
will you go?
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23 FriJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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15 ThuHighest posting month
June 2023 — 5 poems
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