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Rivelus
Member since May 13, 2021
Member for 5 years
Where I'm From
I’m from the 10th night and 21st hour.
From buckeyes, snow, tomatoes, and wheat.
From chocolate covered cherries,
and caramel apple pops.
From sad songs, hilarious jokes,
and the Wiggles.
I’m from oranges and sunshine.
From oceans and sand.
From late night trips and pit stops.
From the broken sign and flashing lights.
From the Owls and the Artists.
I’m from the lonely bus ride.
From the new school.
I’m from the not knowing,
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and the semesterly projects.
From the Mom and the Dad.
From the magnets and the slide.
I’m from the temporary friends,
and the permanent ones.
From the Golden Girls
and the Silver Girls.
From the “if you fit in, how will you stand out?”
I’m from the best friend necklaces,
and the matching fits.
I’m from the Yamaha Oboes,
and Medium-Hard Jones reeds.
From Bach and Mahler,
From Tchaikovsky and Dvorak.
I’m from “Oboes you’re too loud!”,
and “Mark that in your part.”
I’m from “Grow some muscles.”,
and “Think smart, not hard!”.
I’m from watching people leave so soon.
From looking at where she once slept.
Still I wake to the sound of crying,
The sound of music.
The thought of what I will become.
Rivelus’s timeline
- May 2026
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13 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2022
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13 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2021
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28 FriReceived a critique
on Where I'm From from @Arrow
"For me, there are two issues. One is the punctuation. Some lines end with commas (I prefer) and others with periods (which I find abrupt). Overall, the poems has a flowly feel, the rushing by of time and situation and i…" -
28 FriReceived a critique
on Where I'm From from @Geezer
"A Children's Poem --- not ["Where I'm From"] Then your poem ~ Geezer. ." -
14 FriReceived a critique
on Where I'm From from @Candlewitch
"I will wait to critique until after you have complied with the rules. don't be discouraged. always, Cat" -
13 ThuFirst publication
Where I'm From
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13 Thu
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13 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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