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readmymuze
Member since May 22, 2022
Member for 4 years
Adrift
I awoke one morning
expecting the rain
but to my surprise
not a drop had came
I ran outside
to search the sky
and found out for myself
exactly why
Straining my eyes
as it float softly down
and an instant smile
took over my frown
Landing at my feet
i stepped onto
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grabbing the hand of this man
wondering what he
intended to do
He held me tight
steady we went
and i felt so secure
as the cloud was adrift
Saying no words
his heart told me all
suspended in flight
he now calls me doll
In this place of
happy times
he whispered in my ear
honey, welcome to
cloud 9
readmymuze’s timeline
- May 2023
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22 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2022
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03 Wed
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02 TueReceived a critique
on Adrift from @Rosewood Apothecary
"I always loved that word. What are we all but adrift. The images that word conjures are almost limitless. In fact, if we are all adrift in time it would be quite infinite. I loved this poem. The ethereal quality to the…" -
02 Tue
- May 2022
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22 SunReceived a critique
on My Mother Settled For Whiskey Sour from @Candlewitch
"welcome to Neopoet. I see that you are new here. I hope that you will post more of your poetry when you can. I would like to read more from you. this poem is upbeat and fanciful. I see a little punctuation in spots you…" -
22 SunFirst publication
My Mother Settled For Whiskey Sour
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First poem published 1 days later.
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i am just another girl with baggage
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