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RAVENNIGHT
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I'm Still Here
A child has been beaten
and is not old enough
to understand why
He goes into his room
and let's off a silent cry
The child does not cry loudly
for he's afraid his parents may hear
The child is afraid
What could stop this fear?
The child sits in the corner
with bruises on his head
The child isn't suffering anymore
For the child now is dead
The parents come in the room
and they start to cry
They didn't think beatings
would make their child die
-RAVENNIGHT
RAVENNIGHT’s timeline
- July 2023
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30 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2022
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06 Sat
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06 SatFirst contest commendation
Neopoem of The Week Contest July 31 to August 6 2022
with the poem "I'm Still Here".
- July 2022
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31 SunReceived a critique
on I'm Still Here from @Candlewitch
"a very sad subject. you covered it very well. always, Cat ever, eddy" -
31 SunReceived a critique
on I'm Still Here from @RoseBlack
"On a very difficult but yet all too frequent subject." -
31 SunReceived a critique
on I'm Still Here from @Depressed 1
"Very well written about a painful subject." -
31 SunReceived a critique
on I'm Still Here from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Welcome to the site. Thank you for posting your well written poem. It’s very sad to think about this scenario and not be upset. The poem is complete. You have a complete idea and you move quickly towards a definite endi…" -
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I'm Still Here
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30 SatJoined Neopoet
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About Me
About me
Author/screenplay writer, Haven Falls Horror Fixx on
The Monster Channel, Lead media reporter for Women
Of Darkness Magazine.
Location: Massachusetts
Recent Work
Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
|---|---|---|
| I'm Still Here | Neopoem of The Week Contest July 31 to August 6 2022 | – |