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Member since June 14, 2022
Member for 3 years, 11 months
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MY ESSENCE MY SOUL
Can we recognize each other without a face, in that place, where we gather after?
Is the energy of love and hate felt without substance?
Are we just a soul having a human experience? a difference?
A mirror of sorts, of thoughts, reflected in the gleam, or a black hole, cold oblivion, is this the place for my race?
Who or what took the time to unwind the complexities of space in your face and mine.
It's unclear so I would just stare at myself, my soul, me.
Que
Que’s timeline
- December 2024
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09 MonReceived a critique
on MY ESSENCE MY SOUL from @Lavender
"Hello, Que, Spiritual beings in a human world, as the adage goes. True and relevant thoughts in this brief poem. Thank you! L" -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on MY ESSENCE MY SOUL from @Leslie
"In my own way I could answer the queries in your beautiful poem. That would be unfair though you must have your own experience . It's only for you to comprehend your own spiritual journey, but I believe that we've known…" -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on CHAOS OF EMOTIONS from @Leslie
"I think I get it, emotions are simply chaos. Fear drives us through day and night. I loved all of it especially the last line!" -
04 WedPosted a poem
MY ESSENCE MY SOUL
"Can we recognize each other without a face, in that place, where we gather after?" -
04 Wed
- August 2023
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10 ThuReceived a critique
on Of Eyes And Lies from @Ruby Lord
"This line: "You would know in your heart if these things are true." stands out because of its length on the page. Perhaps rephrase it to: "You would know in your heart if this is true." Apart from that one line it flowe…" -
09 WedReceived a critique
on Of Eyes And Lies from @Lavender
"Hello, I like the mirror referring to both society, and our individual image. The last two lines are very strong. Thank you! Lavender" -
08 Tue
- June 2023
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14 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2023
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22 SunReceived a critique
on Push Me from @RoseBlack
"Resonates deep with me. While my mother was well intentioned, her way of handling things, especially my being so very different from her and my father (I am adopted), did some damage to me growing up and left me with di…" -
20 FriReceived a critique
on Push Me from @Rosewood Apothecary
"First off, I agree with Cat, always eliminate articles that are superfluous or unneeded. Usually you can find a more interesting way to phrase a line. There isn’t much else here to critique. I suffered some low grade em…" -
19 ThuReceived a critique
on Push Me from @Candlewitch
"one small suggestion, in this line: " "And then you say you need to be tough,and you are trying to push me." I feel your poem would read more smoothly if you broke it up by making it two lines: And then you say you need…" -
19 Thu
- August 2022
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02 Tue
- June 2022
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15 Wed
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14 TueFirst publication
The Unmasking
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14 Tue
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14 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I started writing poe/y in the 1980s having been inspired by the work of my favorite poets that I mentioned. I'm from Trinidad and Tobago a small island in the Caribbean. I have a lot to say about everything, and my poems is the way I express my thoughts ad emotions. Thank you for the opportunity.
Location: New York / Trinidad and Tobago
Favorite Poets
Wordsworth
Shakespeare
Maya Angelo
My granddaughter and nature itself.
Recent Work
MY ESSENCE MY SOUL
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CHAOS OF EMOTIONS
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Of Eyes And Lies
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Push Me
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The Eternal Question:who won
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The Tears That Fall
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The Unmasking
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