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Punchie
Member since November 15, 2022
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My Friend's Pain
Alright.
“Iʼll be alright” she spoke to me
“Eventually”.
Was that to mean
As time goes by?
After the event?
After all events?
After all the event had went.
But “Whens” are dead
As Time has stopped its clock
And no second hand will measureʼ whysʼ
So long I listen
So dumb and dumber I become,
And syncopated intermittent
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Shocks
Sear my novice heart
We walk In post apocalyptic grief,
We trudge the thicker darker path
Towards the stronger straighter run unto the finish line?
Punchie’s timeline
- November 2023
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15 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2022
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21 Mon
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20 SunReceived a critique
on My Friend's Pain from @Lavender
"Hi, Punchie, I can see that this would be about a broken relationship, but it speaks to me in other ways, too. Perhaps a friend who is ill, or lost a loved one. Apocalyptic grief feels very intense. Actually, the last t…" -
20 SunReceived a critique
on My Friend's Pain from @Geezer
"your friend during a time of grief. I mean grief from the loss of a relationship. It's tough, listening to the stories you watched already. Seeing the bravado one minute, " I'll be alright." to the "What am I going to d…" -
20 Sun
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17 ThuReceived a critique
on David and Goliath from @Jackweb
"From the title of the poem, it's self explanatory to the theme. You've cited a reference from the bible to describe the two forces on a far distance threatening each other; especially Goliath disdained David as an infer…" -
16 WedFirst publication
David and Goliath
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16 Wed
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15 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Teacher actor student counsellor
So so friend wife and mother
Poetry is not about words!
Location: Australia, Perth
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