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pointless_writer

Member since February 18, 2018

Member for 8 years, 3 months

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HAIR

Posted Feb 21, 2018 · 15 lines · 3 critiques

She has long hair,
Her hair flows through the air,
Her hair shields her eyes,
So her emotions remain trapped inside,

He has short hair,
His hair just sits there,
It shows clearly his face,
His emotions are on display,
With all there beauty and grace,

She has no hair on her head,
She is bald instead,
But her emotions are still trapped inside,
Her feelings she tries to hind,
She's loosing her mind ...
and her life

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March 2018
16 Fri

Received a critique
on FAKE SMILE from @weirdelf
"I think fake smiles are easy to detect. Even if we don't consciously think 'that is a fake smile' we feel uncomfortable when we see one. People are very sensitive to unspoken communication through eyes and body language…"
08 Thu

Received a critique
on HAIR from @scribbler
"God only made a few perfect heads. He hid the rest with hair lol. The last stanza is powerful in its statement of how little hair means compared to the true individual. BTW welcome to Neopoet....stan"
08 Thu

Received a critique
on HAIR from @raj
"I do agree with Kelsey about your chosen identity. This poem also made me think which clearly implies that it is not pointless. I am sure you will take Kelsey's suggestions as an objective critique in her personal capac…"
February 2018
21 Wed

Posted a poem
HAIR
"She has long hair,"
Open thread 15 lines
19 Mon

First critique offered
on "LESSONS" by @scribbler
18 Sun

First publication
FAKE SMILE
18 Sun

Most-discussed work
FAKE SMILE

12 critiques to date.
18 Sun

Posted a poem
FAKE SMILE
"Only few can tell if a smile is fake,"
Open thread 14 lines
18 Sun

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I am new to neopoet and have a passion of reading and writing. I am open to consrcutive critism and would like to hear the opinions of all kinds of people.

Location: Ireland

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HAIR

Posted: 21 February, 2018

FAKE SMILE

Posted: 18 February, 2018

Updated: 16 March, 2018

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