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Poetry_thru_a_lens1981
Member since December 22, 2023
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My Beloved Oatcake
Poetry_thru_a_lens1981’s timeline
- December 2024
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22 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2024
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15 MonHighest posting month
January 2024 — 22 poems
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06 SatPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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06 SatPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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06 SatPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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06 SatPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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06 SatPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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06 SatPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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06 SatPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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05 FriPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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05 FriPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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05 FriPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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05 FriPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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05 FriPosted a poem
My Beloved Oatcake
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05 FriReceived a critique
on Voter's Dilemma from @Geezer
"material, is always in fashion. No matter which country you are in, there is someone who is unsatisfied with what is going on. Mostly it has to do with money. The ones who are collecting it all, don't want the ones who…" -
03 WedReceived a critique
on Plucky Little Hunters from @Lavender
"Well said. Nice spin on the title. Thank you! L" - December 2023
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30 SatReceived a critique
on Observer of the Sky from @Lavender
"I like the direct approach to this, especially the final line - it adds a human touch to the observation. I'm wondering about the third stanza. Do you feel it's necessary? I sense the desire to show the image of the rai…" -
29 FriReceived a critique
on He Betrayed A Nation from @Alex Tanner
"I will only make a subjective comment on this work. It hits the nail spot on though I am not sure anyone from another country will know about who you write. It is unbelievable that he, and a few others like him, got awa…" -
28 ThuReceived a critique
on Profile of a Parson Russell Terrier from @Geezer
"and this one reminds me of my Belgian-shepard- Black Lab mix. Rugby was my constant meal companion. He ate whatever I ate. Now, the theme is good, but the meter is off. I have a few suggestions that can make it a bit sm…" -
28 ThuReceived a critique
on Profile of a Parson Russell Terrier from @Candlewitch
"Like Ruby, I can clearly see your happy, healthy well loved girl! What is her name? My favorite lines are: Barking at the postman Whineing at the door (misspelled word?) She may be a bloody nuisance But she'll always be…" -
28 ThuReceived a critique
on Profile of a Parson Russell Terrier from @Ruby Lord
"I sent you a private message, if you click on your name in the top right hand corner and then click on messages, you should be able to read it." -
28 ThuReceived a critique
on Profile of a Parson Russell Terrier from @Ruby Lord
"I enjoyed your poem, and could see your little dog clearly in my mind. Ruby :) xx" -
27 WedCritiqued
"A MESSAGE IN MY DREAMS" by @Ruby Lord
"My favourite lines are: As I unfurled my fingers, letters spilled into my palm, Sister dear I love you, this news will hold you warm." -
26 TueCritiqued
"My Waning Sun" by @leoferaco
"A great description of the tragedy of a young sailor with wishes of seeing the sun on bad days. The weather is renowned for changing dramatically." -
26 TueNew follower
@Ruby Lord
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24 SunCritiqued
"PROCRASTINATE" by @Ruby Lord
"I love your use of rhyming words in this, all referring to hesitation and negative actions. My favourite line is "If you were I, we'd delegate". Perhaps you are suggesting a lack of assertiveness and having someone else…" -
24 SunFirst critique offered
on "PROCRASTINATE" (since unpublished) by @Ruby Lord
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22 FriFirst publication
Personality Types Rule The Day (since unpublished)
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22 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
My passions are gardening and photography. I have recently been inspired by John Cooper Clarke and want to express my thoughts and experiences through poetry.
My writing comes mainly from personal observations of people and their behaviour, as well as the world around us.
Location: United Kingdom, Lancashire and West Midlands, GBR
Favorite Poets
John Cooper Clarke
Erin Gascoigne-Jones
Alan Bennett
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