Poetofheartof2015

Member since December 2, 2015

Member for 10 years, 6 months

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The sleeping cat

Posted Dec 15, 2015 · 7 lines · 2 critiques

As the cat lays peacefully sleeping in
the sun its so relaxed and contented that
it curls up in a ball and rests its head
on its outstretch front paws and its tail
peacefully laying at its side. As the sun slowly
shines down on it and makes it feel warm
and safe.

Poetofheartof2015’s timeline

December 2025
02 Tue

Anniversary
10 years of membership
December 2020
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5 years of membership
December 2016
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Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2015
21 Mon

Received a critique
on The sleeping cat from @Barbara Writes
"Loved reading. my only suggest is a pause ending each the verses"
20 Sun

Received a critique
on The sleeping cat from @Esker
"I owned cats..or they owned me...and I had to give them away when moving....heartbreaking moments but they went to loving enough homes....smaller and more social then dogs....a cat is more personal.....my father in the…"
15 Tue

Posted a poem
The sleeping cat
"As the cat lays peacefully sleeping in"
Open thread 7 lines
15 Tue

Highest posting month
December 2015 — 5 poems
11 Fri

Received a critique
on Goodbye my sweet friend from @Pugilist
"I, too, wanted more than sentences dumped on the page. Poetry, even free verse, needs to leaf the reader through the piece. There has to be a flow that allows the story or thought to be enjoyed. Right now I feel my effo…"
10 Thu

Received a critique
on Goodbye my sweet friend from @wesley snow
"The sentences (verses) seem to run on. I think this would benefit from making shorter sentences or (my preferred) break the lines in the middle of your verses. "Goodbye my sweet Buddy Blaze you were a very sweet..." The…"
10 Thu

Posted a poem
Goodbye my sweet friend
"Goodbye my sweet Buddy Blaze you were a very sweet"
Open thread 9 lines
06 Sun

Received a critique
on Because your not here from @wesley snow
"Poet, was "your're" intentional. It rhymed with another "e" sound What say you?"
06 Sun

Received a critique
on Because your not here from @Sparrow
"The "your're" is an incorrect word use just needs the first "r" to be dropped, or better still use "You are" it will be smoother and run better. Subtle write, just colour it a little more, Yours as always Ian.."
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Because your not here
"Because your're"
Open thread 17 lines
04 Fri

Received a critique
on voices in my head from @Sparrow
"A good start to putting your works on stream, you will notice at the top there are Workshops that you can join, also many other things on this site. Everyone's works need help in some way even the best poets would gathe…"
04 Fri

Received a critique
on Rainbow Bridge from @wesley snow
"I didn't like this one as much as your other. It "felt" too much like prose. I would certainly call it verso libre (free verse). You'll find I'm one of the pickiest poets here, I'll live up to my rep by telling you that…"
03 Thu

Posted a poem
Rainbow Bridge
"There s Place called the Rainbow Bridge where all loving pets go to"
Open thread 13 lines
03 Thu

Critiqued
"The moon ran for shade" by @Barbara Writes
"sound like you lie rhyme like me and very creative too I can tell you put a lot work in it"
03 Thu

First critique offered
on "The moon ran for shade" by @Barbara Writes
02 Wed

First publication
voices in my head
02 Wed

Posted a poem
voices in my head
"Voices in my head makes me think about things I dread."
Open thread 6 lines
02 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I love to write poem its kind my therapy it keep to relax better.
I have been publish a few times I just didn't paid for it .
someday I hope that happens

Location: USA, USA

Favorite Poets

peter Williams Elizabeth Browning