piplup

Member since December 2, 2020

Member for 5 years, 6 months

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2 Poems

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December 2025
02 Tue

Anniversary
5 years of membership
December 2021
02 Thu

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2020
12 Sat

Received a critique
on I hope from @Geezer
"I agree, pare it down a little and it will be great! I never heard of that superstition, but then again, I know some that you wouldn't know; seeing as how I am that much older than you. Keep it up, you are showing great…"
10 Thu

Critiqued
"The Pass o' Killiecrinkle" by @Edna Sweetlove
"I think it was pretty clear that you care for your craft and I enjoyed reading all the creative stuff you came up with. I dont really have any actual critiques though"
10 Thu

Critiqued
"Sad life " by @Schrey
"Sometimes I think it got a bit wordy and repetitive, but I enjoyed it!"
10 Thu

Critiqued
"Every Day Now Death Surrounds Me " by @lovedly
"Sometimes things cut weirdly, and I don't really know what the poem is trying to say"
09 Wed

Received a critique
on I hope from @Gracy
"Hi piplup, this is a good prose poem. There's hope, sadness and many good images. I would try to streamline it a little for it to be a poem. Just remove extra words and so on. The theme and title are to my liking, maybe…"
09 Wed

Received a critique
on I hope from @Dandini
"The 11th of November 1918 at 11.00h was when WW1 ended. Maybe that's the reference."
08 Tue

Received a critique
on I hope from @Dandini
"What on earth does "Wish for you every 11:11" mean? Eleven minutes past eleven? Puzzling!"
08 Tue

Critiqued
"Big Red Plastic Light-Up Santa (December Contest)" by @Michael Anthony
"Awesome!"
08 Tue

Critiqued
"One Wish" by @Sparkle90
"I dont lol"
08 Tue

Critiqued
"One Wish" by @Sparkle90
"I dont really have any critiques, just wanted to say awesome job!"
08 Tue

First critique offered
on "One Wish" by @Sparkle90
08 Tue

First publication
I hope (since unpublished)
02 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 6 days later.

piplup

piplup’s timeline

5 years of membership

One year of membership

on I hope from @Geezer

"The Pass o' Killiecrinkle" by @Edna Sweetlove

"Sad life " by @Schrey

"Every Day Now Death Surrounds Me " by @lovedly

on I hope from @Gracy

on I hope from @Dandini

on I hope from @Dandini

"Big Red Plastic Light-Up Santa (December Contest)" by @Michael Anthony

"One Wish" by @Sparkle90

"One Wish" by @Sparkle90

on "One Wish" by @Sparkle90

I hope (since unpublished)

Membership begins

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