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phattmatt
Member since December 30, 2014
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Wheelchair Man
As I ride
I want to take you
to the far side
though me and you
stayed in the same place
looking for my fortune
let me grew out of touch
aint flashed a smile
for a long while
to concerned of how
I gonna provide for my family
my thoughts takes me back
of who can I trust in this cold world
as I roll I grew of a strong will
Read the rest of the poem Show less
rolling uphill I battle on
even though it’s a long month
I tag along
it’s the last day now
it shouldn’t be long now
before I can smiles
on my wife and three girls faces
payday is here
my baby girl tug at me with a smile
with the sight of luxury
makes me wish the moment
can stay a little while
tomorrow is back to normal
back at work so stiff and formal…
phattmatt’s timeline
- December 2024
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10 years of membership
- December 2019
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30 MonAnniversary
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- December 2015
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One year of membership
- January 2015
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16 FriReceived a critique
on Wheelchair Man from @judyanne
"i think this is great – it just needs breaking into stanzas in order to make it clearer here is one suggestion and i have placed a few offered edits for some of the lines i like your unique voice, and don’t wish to corr…" -
15 Thu
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14 WedReceived a critique
on Wheelchair Man from @Barbara Writes
"I like where your theme is going but reading was like kinda hard to follow as it jump from one lovely moment to the next too quickly. The critique from Ellie and Wesley is really good. At the end of the day it's your wo…" -
02 Fri
- December 2014
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31 WedFirst publication
The Realm
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31 Wed
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30 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
always writing in spare time but open for critic because i am an amateur poet
Location: South Africa
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