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pen2tree
Member since April 5, 2018
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Inevitable
Death is the enemy the only one to destroy this relentless entity is he whom created me. You have the advantage of living not in the tomb even if by being consumed that you will no longer believe flowers bloom but weeds remain green unseen in being alive no matter all the grey gloom. Sunlight always fill my heart wounds but I will swoon to see the brightly lit midnight moon. Punch back with silence does not mean I resort to violence the hatred but love under dirt makes all the effort worth being beat down not for deathly stare however the glare of the sparkling mind will forever glow in endless time.
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- April 2023
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05 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2019
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05 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2018
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21 SatReceived a critique
on Inevitable from @weirdelf
"We have everyone here from adolescents first angsty poems to major published poets all with one goal- to help each other learn to write better. This is the only poetry site on the web where you it doesn't even have to c…" -
16 MonReceived a critique
on Inevitable from @weirdelf
"and don't like reading prose. I broke this into verse for you without changing a word, though the meaning may have changed slightly. You can fiddle with that. Inevitable Death is the enemy, the only one to destroy this…" -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on Inevitable from @lovedly
"this poetry is good but looks like prose Hope you will rethink and re-ink I am only free wheeler on neopoet welcome" -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on Inevitable from @themoonman
"Welcome to Neopoet!!! Thank you for sharing your work. This piece feels like performance art, have you done that sort of thing? I'd change "whom" in the first line, threw me off, but just a suggestion. cheers, Richard" -
05 ThuFirst publication
Inevitable
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05 ThuPosted a poem
Inevitable
"Death is the enemy the only one to destroy this relentless entity is he whom created me. You have the advantage of living not in the tomb even if by being consumed that you will no longer believe flowers bloom but weeds remain green unseen in being alive no matter all the grey gloom. Sunlight always fill my heart wounds but I will swoon to see the brightly lit midnight moon. Punch back with silence does not mean I resort to violence the hatred but love under dirt makes all the effort worth being beat down not for deathly stare however the glare of the sparkling mind will forever glow in endless time." -
05 ThuJoined Neopoet
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About Me
About me
Simple gal w/extraordinary mind, is what I would like to be known to be. However am new at this started to write for fun and my daughter encouraged me to share my writings through reading my journal. I've been told am funny, easy going, free spirited, and just am in love with love.
Location: USA
Favorite Poets
Rumi
Shakespeare
Angelou. Life is poetry in itself to me.
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