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oreoaddict
Member since April 6, 2012
Member for 14 years, 1 month
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oreoaddict’s timeline
- April 2022
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06 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- April 2017
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06 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2013
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06 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2012
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20 FriReceived a critique
on ELVES from @Candlewitch
"As folklore would have it on a very windy day elves make love to mirrors before their image blows away. Being a fan of elves, I find this a very entertaining thought, lol! always, Cat" -
20 Fri
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19 ThuFirst publication
ELVES (since unpublished)
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14 SatCritiqued
"Curtain Call" by @themoonman
"I know I'll get hell for how the point of this comment is derived, but here goes: For some obscure discriminatory reason, of late, perhaps because I have found few worthy of my attention, I have been confident that the…" -
14 SatCritiqued
"Listening with the soul" by @Cloudthings
"Would it be sacrilegious to redesign all that we know? Like a child at play, yielding only to the infinite choices harbored solely in your imagination you take God’s clay and defiantly but effectually you become the new…" -
10 TueCritiqued
"Cover page" by @Cloudthings
"Loved is the creator who is the illusionist…the craftsman of deceit. Adored, also, is the master of the stage and silver screen; witty, tender and sensuous…a perfect mold of gestures and lines, expressions and tone. Yet…" -
10 TueCritiqued
"Retreat-ment" by @Cloudthings
"Can the sound of clapping hands and the chants of, ‘bravo…bravo’ ever satisfy you? Can the filled class rooms and lecture halls at Universities… the masses gathered in awe; raising you above their shoulders to express t…" -
10 TueCritiqued
"Whispers and bone" by @Cloudthings
"I know what you are saying, dear Anni. …so alone with your thoughts…questioning the malevolent principles of aging. Time passing; dreams bartered and sold, sitting amongst the ruins and souvenirs of your life…testing yo…" -
10 TueFirst critique offered
on "Whispers and bone" by @Cloudthings
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06 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 13 days later.
About Me
About me
A true poet, it is best, learn nothing
so that all he fabricates is born
from original thought.
OREO
If, of course, scientists from our future
have no interest in our 'present', we can only assume
that man will never be able to time travel
into the past, for if they could
they would already be amongst us.
Or, perhaps the assumed alien aircrafts
we have witnessed overhead are in fact
families of our future attempting to escape
their dieing planet.
OREO
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