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or12
Member since April 24, 2012
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Frantic
I am loosing it
At the edge of sanity
Another step and damned
The aura of madness below
Menacingly stretching its murky lips
Fate; her claws wedged in my skin
Just like others I am a victim, blame her
Dragged spiteful through her coarse domain
Cursing while she chuckles. 'This is life.’ She says
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- May 2012
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02 WedReceived a critique
on The Silent Observer from @weirdelf
"You have made that feeling abundantly clear in the rest of the poem. Look at it this way, if you show the reader how abhorrent the masks are, they make their own decisions, but you have raised awareness as a poet. When…" - April 2012
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26 ThuReceived a critique
on Frantic from @Candlewitch
"The title doesn't really cover the feeling of the poem, IMHO. How about something like; "Frantic" "Fevered Mind" or "Ledge". In this line: "I curse while she chuckles. 'This is life.’ She says" you could avoid so many "…" -
26 Thu
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26 Thu
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26 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Untamed temerity" by @Roscoe Lane
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24 TueFirst publication
The Silent Observer
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24 Tue
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24 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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I love poetry, written too few and live in East Africa
Location: East Africa
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