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Oppressed smith
Member since October 31, 2024
Member for 1 year, 7 months
Introduction to who I be
I'm tall like a tree
Ballin Anthony Wallace snatching wallets
Ever since back in college
A pic pocket armed robin hood
Looking at the rich with a sacred pitch
Give the fabled minister his due
Twisted clue you owe me your shit to
Preaching teaching like a lit fuse
The deacons my bitch too
Tweaking like a witch tooth
Crooked in fact look at my reactions
Black Sabbath moon good afternoon to paster
Sacrificing actors for petty laughter
I'm joking not a witch or a minister
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It's more sinister dude
My name's not Anthony it's Nancy drew
My investigations have led to assassinations
A basket case bombs strapped to the waist
Fuck mass black Sabbs here's your stuff back
My rough past this ain't a love track
Who I be when I push the gas
Has gasoline like more gasoline
As for mass it's gravity
My name's acid lean ask for me
next time you need to spit passionately
Oppressed smith’s timeline
- October 2025
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31 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2024
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03 Sun
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02 Sat
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01 FriCritiqued
"A Cruel Joke" by @Candlewitch
"So well done I couldn't help feeling bad for the woman and the baby I would have smacked the guy very good work" -
01 FriFirst critique offered
on "A Cruel Joke" by @Candlewitch
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01 FriReceived a critique
on Makeshift night from @Candlewitch
"welcome to the Neopoet poetry site! may your poetry find a home here. It is very nice to meet you! regards, Cat/Candlewitch" - October 2024
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31 ThuReceived a critique
on Makeshift night from @Geezer
"a celebration is in order? Honeymoon in the shadows? At any rate, having read your poem, it does not appear to be of an explicit nature, [at least not here on this site]. ~ Geezer. ." -
31 ThuFirst publication
Makeshift night
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31 Thu
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31 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I like to write and express
Location: Canada, ns
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