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Nyts.tar
Member since October 18, 2024
Member for 1 year, 7 months
The Night's persona
As the moon lies
On a blanket of twinkling stars
Every creature
Young and old
Broken or whole
Scatter from the cold
Seeking refuge
In Mother Nature's hold
As a mother rocks her baby
To an innocent slumber
A butterfly in it's cosy cacoon
You're probably wondering about the racoons
They're safe under the light of the moon
The corpses lay still in their tombs
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A little dead, a little gloom
the lillies don't bloom
It's a noisy silence
The harmonies of the night
As the stars twinkle bright
As I lay my head
Goodnight
Nyts.tar’s timeline
- October 2025
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18 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2024
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23 WedReceived a critique
on The Night's persona from @Candlewitch
"Welcome to Neopoet! I much enjoyed this poem! my favorite lines are: As the moon lies On a blanket of twinkling stars Every creature Young and old Broken or whole Scatter from the cold Seeking refuge In Mother Nature's…" -
23 Wed
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22 TueReceived a critique
on Truth is from @Candlewitch
"I like your style and hope to read more of your poetry. I have an alter ego by the name of eddy styx who writes dark poetry and posts it here (under my name) I really like the way it unwinds. my favorite lines are: A ki…" -
22 Tue
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18 FriReceived a critique
on The Reunion from @Rula
"A warm welcome to Neopoet. I like the raw feelings in this. Your words shine with love. Looking forward to reading more of your works. Best wishes." -
18 FriFirst publication
The Reunion
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18 Fri
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18 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Greetings to the Neopoet community, I am Shalom but commonly known as Nyts.tar
I began writing at a very early age, as it was a form of escape and a way to express my self as a being with many layers. In that later stages of my oddesey of being a poet I discovered an amazing poet who became a role model for me in the poetry department, and this amazing poet ladies and gentlemen is none other than Maya Angelou. No doubt about she is my inspiration as she encourages me to write from within. I explore genres with every deep emotions as I feel that people can easily relate to my words. I have the ability to put myself in my audiences shoes. I humbly acknowledge that there is plenty room for growth and I am hoping to grow as I share my work with you all.
Location: Gauteng South Africa
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